Men don't cry
It was odd to see him crying.
Men are strong.
Men don’t cry.
They mustn’t cry.
We the women need them to not cry, so we can feel that at least someone has still the control, someone can help, everything is going to get better.
Because watching a man crying is devastating.
When a man cries, you know that everything is wrong. Everything is terribly wrong.
He doesn’t hold you up anymore, because he’s crying with you. And desperation is simply too overwhelming.
It was odd to see him crying.
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Good job! I made some grammatical corrections and suggestions for better wording:
We the women need them to not cry stay composed, so we can feel that at least someone has still has the control, someone can help, everything is going to get better.
He doesn’t hold protect or support you up anymore, because he’s crying with you. And the desperation is simply too overwhelming.
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Men don't cry
It was odd to see him crying.Men are strong.
Men don’t cry.
They mustn’t cry.
We the women need them to not cry, so we can feel that at least someone has still the control, someone can help, everything is going to get better.
Because watching a man crying is devastating.
When a man cries, you know that everything is wrong. Everything is terribly wrong.
He doesn’t hold you up anymore, because he’s crying with you. And desperation is simply too overwhelming.
It was odd to see him crying.
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