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I don't want to love someone in such a way Yesterday I had a dream, I am not sure it is a beautiful dream.I got my love in the dream, but I was very humble. My love and I are not equal.I love him, so I submit to him,take care of him and lost myself.I got my love, but I did not feel happy. He did not give me any response to the love, just stay with me. After waking up, I thought, is this the one I want? I know he is not in my heart. I want the people , who I love and love me. But I think I can love myself frist.I can think of so many reasons why you should love yourself, but here ' s just one: It is incredibly dull and uninspiring to be around people who do not love themselves.

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I don't want to love someone in such a way

Yesterday I had a dream, I am not sure if it is a beautiful dream. I got my love in the dream, but I was very humble. My love and I arewere not equal. I loved him, so I submited to him, taketook care of him and lost myself. I got my love, but I did not feel happy. He did not give me any response to the love I gave, just stayed with me. After waking up, I thought, “is this the one I want?”. I know he is not in my heart. I want the peopleperson, who I love and loves me. But I think I canshould love myself first. I can think of so many reasons why you should love yourself, but here's just one: It is incredibly dull and uninspiring to be around the peopleperoson who do not love themselvesoneself.

 

Hi Julia, 

I just did this correction while reading. You write English just well, and I just changed pieces.

Because I am not native, it might be better be checked by them as well. 

Interesting essay. Great job.

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Maybe you don't know the feelings of Asian people. In general, we can devote ourselves to love, our feelings are restrained.
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' It is incredibly dull and uninspiring to be around people who do not love themselves' is correct English. To refer to an individual : It is incredibly dull and uninspiring to be around someone who does not love himself. I'm not sure about the sentiment expressed ; maybe you can post this as a Discussion topic and see what response it attracts.

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