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3days holiday. We had 3 days off in row. First day, We had a date with no kids. It is for the first time in quite long period! Second day, we went to a spa. There was a bath tub on the ground and we could enjoy mountain view with naked. I feel relaxed. Today, we went to my husband's mom's house. We talked, drinked and ate a lot! I think maybe during this 3 days I put on my weight...Because I know how much I had ate.... Anyway we had so good days!! 三連休がありました。 一日目はこどもなしで夫婦でデートをしました。かなり久々です。 二日目は温泉に行きました。そこには露天風呂があり、裸で山の景色を楽しめました。癒されました。 今日は夫の実家に行きました。私たちはたくさん、しゃべって、飲んで、食べました。 この三日間で体重が増えたかも知れません。。。だってどれだけ食べたか自分で知っているから。。 それはさておき、よい日々を過ごせました!

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3 Three days holiday.

We had 3 (three) days off in  a row.
The first day, We had a date with no kids. It was is for the first time in quite a long time  period!
On the second day, we went to a spa. There was a bath tub on the ground (this could be a Jacuzzi, or a hot tub.  When you say on the ground, do you mean it was dug into the ground?  If so we could say  a sunken hot tub) and we could enjoy the mountain view while naked/in the nude  with naked. I felt feel relaxed.
Today, we went to my husband's mom's house. We talked, drank drinked and ate a lot!
I think maybe during these this 3 (three) days I put on my weight...Because I know how much I have eaten/had to eat  had ate....
Anyway we had really so good days!!

三連休がありました。
一日目はこどもなしで夫婦でデートをしました。かなり久々です。
二日目は温泉に行きました。そこには露天風呂があり、裸で山の景色を楽しめました。癒されました。
今日は夫の実家に行きました。私たちはたくさん、しゃべって、飲んで、食べました。
この三日間で体重が増えたかも知れません。。。だってどれだけ食べたか自分で知っているから。。
それはさておき、よい日々を過ごせました!


Sounds like you had a lovely three days holiday.


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3 days holiday.

We had 3 days off in a row.
On the First day, We had a date with no kids. It is for the first time in quite long period! (I would write it like this: On the First Day, We had a date without kids for the first time in a long while.) 
The Second day, we went to a spa. There was a bath tub on the ground and we could enjoy mountain view with naked. I feel relaxed.

(Maybe: There was an in-ground tub or maybe a tub where we could bath naked and enjoy the mountain view.)
Today, we went to my husband's mom's house. We talked, drinked drank and ate a lot!
I think maybe during this these 3 days I put on my weight...Because I know how much I ate....
Anyway we had so good days a great time or a wonderful time!!

Actually you can change the so to such and it would sound much better. "We had such good days" or "we had such a great time". use such to add emphasis.

三連休がありました。
一日目はこどもなしで夫婦でデートをしました。かなり久々です。
二日目は温泉に行きました。そこには露天風呂があり、裸で山の景色を楽しめました。癒されました。
今日は夫の実家に行きました。私たちはたくさん、しゃべって、飲んで、食べました。
この三日間で体重が増えたかも知れません。。。だってどれだけ食べたか自分で知っているから。。
それはさておき、よい日々を過ごせました!

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3days holiday.

We had 3 days off in a row.
First day, We had a date with no kids. It is for the first time in quite a long period!
Second day, we went to a spa. There was a bath tub on the ground and we could enjoy the mountain view with naked. I feel relaxed.
Today, we went to my husband's mom's house. We talked, drinked drank and ate a lot!
Maybe during this these 3 days I put on my weight...Because I know how much I ate so good dishes (you should revise this)....
Anyway we had so good days!! (Suggestion: Anyway we had fun during these 3 days)


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Yes I am happy to have such kind persons correct my notebook! I think it should be so fast that my kids would be like your son's age. I love the time spending with my giggling kids!
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すごい! I won't make corrections, because others have already done it so well. Your story is very clear and easy to understand. 私たちの子供(二人の息子)は今大学生です。But I remember how nice those vacations were.

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