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Do we need a more expensive air travel? Cheap flights make us traveling across border in a low price possible, which I think is beneficial to the public, though we should reduce the unnecessary travel by air. People could experience various culture through traveling different countries by plane; thus expanding their outlook. Some people could get better job opportunities in other countries then obtain higher income; while some businessmen are possible to meet commercial chances to gain benefits by exporting or importing products. Some of them would lose these possibilities if the prices of flights were arise. Meanwhile, some people argue that the pricy service of flights will diminish the negative impact to the environment from ... High price will make some people abandon their plans of traveling by air to sort of destinations frequently; thereby reducing the flights, so as to reduce the greenhouse gas exhausted from planes. Other ... associated problems, including noise pollution, the environmental destruction from the construction and maintain of airports and other related infrastructures, will be improved. From my perspective, it is unnecessary to promote the flight prices because people deserve the chance of traveling and relaxing in different places. Citizens, especially who live and work in big cities, are extremely busy and full of pressure. If the flight is cheaper, they can take vacation in a relatively further spot. For example, Chinese tourists can visit some countries in Africa and enjoy the local food, rather than just relieve at home. In conclusion, my view is that decreasing the flight price is unreasonable. Through technological innovations, airport companies can reduce the strain on environment from flights.

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Do we need a more expensive air travel?

Cheap flights make us traveling across borders in for/at a low price possible, which I think is beneficial to the public, though we should reduce the unnecessary travel by air.

People could can experience various cultures through traveling to different countries by plane; when we use "could" for the conditional mood, the sentence almost always has an "if" clause.  用"could“来表条件语气时,句子应该有里面有”if“的分句thus expanding their outlook. Some people could get better job opportunities in other countries and then obtain higher income; while some businessmen are possible to could meet come upon commercial chances opportunities to gain benefits by exporting or importing products. Some of them would lose these possibilities if the prices of flights were arise to rise. "arise"意思是“站起来”,比较陈旧的

Meanwhile, some people argue that the pricey service of flights will if flights were to become more expensive it would diminish the negative impact to on the environment from flying.
High prices will make some people abandon their plans of traveling by air to all sorts of destinations frequently, thereby reducing the number of flights, so as to reduce the greenhouse gas exhausted from emitted by planes. Other associated problems, including noise pollution, the environmental destruction from the construction and maintain  maintenance of airports and other related infrastructure projects, will be improved. would also be ameliorated.
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From my perspective, it is unnecessary to promote increase the flight prices price of flights because people deserve the chance of traveling and relaxing in different places. Citizens, especially those who live and work in big cities, are extremely busy and full of pressure. If the flight is flights were cheaper, they can could take a vacation in a relatively further far-away spot. For example, Chinese tourists can visit some countries in Africa and enjoy the local food, rather than just relieve relaxat home.

In conclusion, my view is that decreasing the flight price price of flights is unreasonable. Through technological innovations, airport companies airlines can reduce the strain on the environment from flights.

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