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Question: Students at university often have a choice of place to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or apartment in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages living in an apartment. Where would you prefer to live? Gives reasons for your preference.My answer:
Sometimes a hard period of time helps us to become independent. As a result, livening in university dormitories is better than living in an apartment. If I had to choose between living in universities on campus and an apartment, I would definitely choose dormitories. I think this, because advantages of that are more than apartment. I think that living on campus is more advantageous than living in an apartment.
The first advantage of living in university housing it’s is being close next to the classes. So it’s a good argument reason as students always are always late for the first classes. They shouldn’t go to the university from the other side of the city. Besides that, the atmosphere is really perfect for studying. When students look at each others, they would like to study either as well and it’s really nice when a small group studies together. Actually, it’s called “environment influence “. Moreover, in this case students are near their professors and teachers. They can keep in touch with them and get answers to their questions as soon as possible. For example, I used to live on a university campus, and I could keep in touch with my professor. And also I also liked to go the library, because only there I could concentrate on my studies.
Even though students know about these advantages of living in on campus, some of them prefer their own comfort. So they would like to live in an apartment. Actually, it’s understandable because in these ages times people would like to live alone and be independent from their parents. They want to do what they want to and whenever. Also, when a person lives alone in an accommodation, it helps him or her become more confident and will by doing everything by himself or herself. For instance, my friend lives in a penthouse alone and she really likes it. Moreover, she does everything by herself such as, paying bills, buying foods, cleaning etc., and these make her stronger and independent.
Considering everything mentioned above, I want to emphasize that since we are students, it would be better to live in the university dormitories. University is the place for studying and students in this period should concentrate on their studies and campus will help them. Personally I prefer living in university dormitories.
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