Ntional holiday
Today is the third day of our 7-day-long National holiday! I just stayed at home except went to a sea food restaurant. Because I can't bear the crowed situation on many places. At night, I read the newspaper and learnt the news that a place in Zhejiang province,which is the south part of China,has been crushed by huge people! what a holiday. I really don't like the crowded people but I have no choice. I live in this country. I often think about the scenic spots in Australia,Britain,United States,etc.
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National holiday
Today is the third day of our 7-day-long National holiday! I just stayed at home except went going to a sea food restaurant. Because I can't bear the crowded situations on in many places. At night, I read the newspaper and learnt the news that a place in Zhejiang province, which is the south part of China, has been crushed by huge a lot of people! What a holiday. I really don't like the crowded people places but I have no choice. I live in this country. I often think about the scenic spots in Australia, Britain, United States, etc.Nice writing. Don't forget a space after commas, always. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections. - Jason
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