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A Funny Thing Happened to me One night, I was walking on the campus by myself. Suddenly a guy came to me and said hello. I can barely see his face because it's dark and there was no light on the street. He said he had come across me many times around the university and had observed me without my noticing for a while so he asked if I could exchange my phone number with him and even start a relationship. It came out of the blue and got me embarrassed. I asked if he was a student. He replied yes and told me it was his second year.I also introduced myself to the strange student but when I told him I wasn't a student but a teacher at the college, the guy got shocked and immediately ran off. I suppose it's a more embarrassing situation to him than me. I don't recall what he looks like but sometimes I wonder If he would still observe me when he runs into me.

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A Funny Thing Happened to Me

One night, as I was walking around on the campus by myself, a guy suddenly came up to say hello to me and said hello. I can could barely see his face because it was dark and there were no lights on the street. He said he had come across me many times around the university and had observed me without me noticing for a while so and he asked if I could exchange my phone number with him and even start a relationship. (Comment: Okay this seems really awkward, because I think in Western culture you normally ask someone to "go out/go on a date with you" and "starting a relationship" is only implied)

It came out of the blue and I got me embarrassed. I asked if he was a student. He replied yes ('He replied that he was' sounds better otherwise you may want to use quotation marks for a direct quotation) and told me it was his second year. I also introduced myself to the strange student but when I told him that I wasn't a student but a teacher at the college, the guy got was shocked and immediately ran off. I suppose it's was a more embarrassing situation to for him than me.

I don't recall what he looks like but sometimes I wonder If he would still observes me when we pass by each other he runs into me.

Good work. I mainly just rephrased some things to make it sound better. I enjoyed the story.

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A Funny Thing Happened to Me

One night I was walking on the campus by myself. Suddenly a guy came up to me and said hello. I could barely see his face because it was dark and there was no light in the street. He said he had come across me many times around the university and had observed me without my noticing for a while so he asked if I could exchange my phone number with him and even start a relationship.

It came out of the blue and made me embarrassed. I asked if he was a student. He replied yes and told me it was his second year. I also introduced myself to the strange student but when I told him I wasn't a student but a teacher at the college, the guy got shocked and immediately ran off. I suppose was more embarrassing for him than for me.

I don't recall what he looked like but sometimes I wonder If he still observes me when he runs into me.

Very well written!

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