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I'm falling in love with a girl Chemistry class. When I was in the secondary school I fell in "luv" with a girl in another school While we were sitting in the same class She didnt talk much just kept quite all the time But when teachers called her to solve a Maths problem Surprisingly, she did a really good job that no one in my class can do I've admired her since that time I've seen many girls good at Maths like her But no one can compare with her Humble and no try to show off anything Just simple and always alone Her voice is not cute at all Deep, slow and warm manly But I really enjoy it Her hair isnt longer like the others It's not fashion or fussy Her eyes are brighter than anything else No need to wear glasses but I cant live without glasses Although we aren't the same at all But friends usually say that I am really like her I'm so glad to hear that But the distance became longer When she had passed the Maths exam with flying color And I was just a loser I had no longer sitting in the same class with her I've not met her for a long time after that Then when the entrance exam to a high-school started In the day we took the exam I met her again She was chatting happily with her friends. Suddenly, I realized that She's not chilled as I thought But everything was collapsed when I heard that She joined the Chemistry class And I joined the Maths class Now, we're both in high-school I still keep watching her every day I really want to be her friend but how hard I tried We still like two streets that never meet at least one Even there are many pretty girls outside My eyes just see only you Cuz We wore the same clothes on the first day at school We bind hair in the same way We're just always alone all the time Cuz You're the reasons for me to keep studying hard So I'll be able to continue study in this school So I'll be able to see you every day So I'll be able to catch up with you And the last thing I hope We can be friends someday When we're brave enough to say "Hi, how are you today ?" "Would you like to be my friend ?"

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I'm falling in love with a girl in Chemistry class.

When I was in the secondary school
I fell in "love" with a girl at another school

While we were sitting in the same class
She didn't talk much
and just kept quiet all the time
But when teachers called on her
to solve a Maths problem
Surprisingly, she did a really good job, 
which no one in my class could've done. 
I've admired her since then.

I've seen many girls who are good at Maths like her
But no one can compare to her
Humble and not trying to show off. anything
Just simple and always alone.

Her voice is not cute at all
Deep, slow, warm, and manly
But I really like it.

Her hair isn't longer like the others
It's not fashionable or fussy

Her eyes are brighter than anything else
No need to wear glasses
but I cant live without glasses

Although we aren't the same at all,
my friends usually say that I am really like her
I'm so glad to hear that

But the distance became longer
When she had passed the Maths exam with flying colors
And I was just a loser
I was no longer sitting in the same class with her

I haven't met her for a long time after that
Then when the entrance exam to a high-school started
On the day we took the exam
I met her again
She was chatting happily with her friends.
Suddenly, I realized that
She's not as chilled* as I thought    (I'm not sure what you mean by chilled. Maybe quiet or shy?)

But everything was collapsed
when I heard that
She joined the Chemistry class
And I joined the Maths class

Now, we're both in high-school
I still keep watching her every day
I really want to be her friend
but no matter how hard I tried
We are still like two streets
that never meet. at least one

Even though there are many pretty girls outside
My eyes just see only you

Because
We wore the same clothes on the first day at school
We tie our hair in the same way
We're both always alone all the time

Because 
You're the reasons that I keep studying hard
So I'll be able to continue studying at this school
So I'll be able to see you every day
So I'll be able to catch up with you

And the last thing is, I hope that
We can be friends someday
When we're brave enough to say
"Hi, how are you today ?"
"Would you like to be my friend ?"


This is really good, and it was fun to read!

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