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Speech script about countries I want to go Today I will talk about country where I want to go. That said there’s many countries I’d like to go, so I will pick out two countries I want to go and I will talk about about them. I want to go to Sweden and France. (Now show classmates the national frog of Sweden and France) As a reason for that the former is called Gender developed country in a book and the later is the Louvre Museum there. I have known Sweden is always at the top of GEM. GEM(Gender Empowerment Measure) means a index that women assertively participate in the economic world and political life and whatever they can do decision‐making. Meanwhile Japan is the lowest rank in developed countries. According to the book It is said that Sweden was the same state as current Japan about 20 years ago. So I thought I go directly to there, and I may be able to get something hint to improve. Next, about reason why I chose France, I went and saw The Marie Antoinette Exhibition the other day. And there I felt deep emotion for the first time to see pictures and thing cherished her up close have never only in books seen them before. This picture is a room reproduced her private space have been called "Petit Appartement". (Now show classmates the picture of Petit Appartment) So I thought I'd like to go to the Louvre Museum which is one of the great museum. In addition I'd like to there is shooting place for a movie, "The Da Vinci Code". That's all for my presentation. Thank you for listening.

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Speech script about countries I want to go

Today I will talk about countries I would like to visit.
That said There are many countries I’d like to go to, but I will pick out two countries I want to visit and I will talk about about them.
I want to travel (just to add different vocabulary) to Sweden and France.



(Now show classmates the national frog flag of Sweden and France)


As a reason for that the former is called Gender developed country in a book and the later is the Louvre Museum there.

I am interested in Sweden because it is know as a gender developed country, and I am interest in France because the Louvre is there. (Maybe say "Sweden has a high level of gender equality") 
I have known Sweden is always at the top of the GEM.
The GEM(Gender Empowerment Measure) is an index that measures how much women assertively actively participate in the economic world and political life. It also shows how much decision making power they have. and whatever they can do decision‐making.
Meanwhile, Japan has the lowest rank off all developed countries.
According to the book, it is said that Sweden was in the same state 20 years ago that Japan is in now.
So I thought I would go directly to there, so that I might get a hint of how to improve Japanese society in this way. 

Next, I will talk about my reasons for choosing France. I went and saw the Marie Antoinette exhibition the other day, and, while I was there, I felt a deep emotion for the first time to  upon seeing pictures and her other cherished belongings her up close.  I have never ever only seen them in books seen them before. 

This picture is a room that show what her private space  have been called "Petit Appartement".

(Now show classmates the picture of Petit Appartment)

So I thought I'd like to go to the Louvre Museum which is one of the great museum.
In addition I'd like to there is shooting place for a movie, "The Da Vinci Code".

That's all for my presentation.
Thank you for listening.

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This picture is a room that shows what her private space looked like. It is called "Petit Appartement". 


(Now show classmates the picture of Petit Appartment)

So I thought I'd like to go to the Louvre Museum which is one of the great museum.
In addition Another reason I'd like to go there is that there is a shooting place for a movie called "The Da Vinci Code".
(or you could say "Another reason I'd like to go there is that the movie "The Da Vinci Code" was shot there.)

That's all for my presentation.
Thank you for listening.

Good job! It seems like your English is of a pretty high level so I would try to use more vocabulary replacing "to go to" such as "to visit", "to travel to", "to experience" etc, but good job overall!

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