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Junior firefighters
In Finland volunteer firefighters have great responsibility in large low populated areas. You could say that major area of our country is protected by volunteers but most people are protected by officials.
As a junior firefighter youth have great opportunity to build friendship with others while learning useful skills of fire security and first aid.
When youth grow, and leave their hometowns for college or other studies they usually find other activity to fill their spare time in large cities with their new friends. But I have been delighted to notice that they usually join as volunteer firefighters to emergency department when moving back to countryside after wild years around the world.
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Junior firefighters
Yesterday, as I was taking my sons and one of their friends to join a junior firefighters weekly training event, I started to think about whether other countries have similar activity for their youth. A quick search with Google proves that they do. I didn't have time to investigate it further but I believe that there are similar activities for children in many countries.
In Finland, volunteer firefighters have great responsibility in large lowly-populated areas. You could say that most of our country is protected by volunteers but most people are protected by professional firefighters.
As a junior firefighters, young people have great opportunities to build friendships with others while learning the useful skills of fire safety and first aid.
When young people grow up and leave their hometowns for college or other studies, they usually find other activities to fill their spare time in large cities with their new friends. But I have been delighted to notice that they usually join the fire department again as volunteer firefighters when they move back to the countryside after their wild years travelling the world.
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