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I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English? I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application? I’d like to speak about the reason I entry your company. I’m very interested in your products. Your lump seems stronger light and cencer than other company. I thought there is a possibility to make various idea lump. I would like to sell your lump and make any new lump over the world. I thought that this is exactly what I want to do in my entire life. In the meantime, I have been study abroad to Finland for 10 month, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility more globally. I am able to adjust to new circumstance quick and study harder to through expericing study abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.
30 May 2017 10:38
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I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English?

I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application?

I’d like to speak about <strike>the </strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">my</font> reason <strike>I entry</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">for joining</font> your company. I’m very interested in your products. Your<strike> lump</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">lamp</font> seems to <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">be</font> stronger<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> light<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">er,</font> and cencer ?? than other compan<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ies</font>. I thought there is a possibility to make various <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ideas for</font> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">lamps</font>. I would like to sell your <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">lamps</font> and make any new <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">lamp</font> <strike>over</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">around</font> the world. I <strike>thought </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">think</font> that this is exactly what I want to do in my entire life. In the meantime, I have <strike>been study</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">studied</font> abroad <strike>to</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">in</font> Finland for 10 month<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</font>, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility <strike>more</strike> globally. I am able to adjust to new circumstance<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s </font>quick and<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> I</font> study harder <strike>to through</strike> <strike>expericing</strike>  <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">in my experience in studying</font> <strike>study</strike> abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.
30 Mayıs 2017
I'm sorry but I really do not understand any of this... Your lump seems stronger light and cencer than other company. I thought there is a possibility to make various idea lump. I would like to sell your lump and make any new lump over the world. Maybe you mean "lamp" and "sensor" but it does not make sense.
30 Mayıs 2017

I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English?

I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application?

I’d like to speak about why I want to join your company. I’m very interested in your products. (Your (lump?) seems stronger light and (cencer?) than other companies'.?) I thought there is a possibility to make various idea lump. I would like to sell your lump and make any new lump over the world. This is exactly what I want to do in life. In the meantime, I have been studying abroad in Finland for 10 months, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility in general. I am able to adjust to new circumstances quickly, study harder and gain experience by study abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.

Very well written but a little obscure in places.

30 Mayıs 2017

I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English?

I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application?

I’d like to speak about the reason (why) I (gain) entry into (or maybe you mean choose)  your company. I’m very interested in your products. Your lump (lamps!!!)  seems stronger lighter and cencer(?) than other company. I thought (think) there is a possibility to make various idea lump (lamps). I would like to sell your lump (lamps) and make any different new lump (lamps) over the world. I (think) thought that this is exactly what I want to do in my entire life. In the meantime, I have been study (studied) abroad to Finland for 10 month, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility more globally. I am able to adjust to new circumstance(s) quickly and study harder to through expericing(?) study abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.

I did my best to correct according to my understanding of the text.

I hope, it helps you

30 Mayıs 2017
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