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June 24, 2017 It was sunny yesterday, but I did not go out. I studied Economic, English and Chinese. Yesterday was very busy day. I was very tired, so I went to bed early last night. I would like to write why I study these subjects. First, I study Englsh for TOEIC test ,and English class. My English class's teacher gives students a lot of homework. I sometimes spend a whole day finishing my homework! In addition, she is a hard marker, so I can learn many things from her. I appreciate of her. Second, I study Chinese for passing HSK Grade six. I can speak Chinese but I am not good at writting. It's because, maybe I don't use simplified Chinese character, so I cannot remenber it. My mother's native language is Chinese, so she teaches me Chinese difficult pronunciation, and difficult Chinese character. All my familly can speak Chinese, so I speak Chinese with my parents, and grand parents. While, I always talk in Japanese with my sibling at home. Third, I study economic for term examination. I think microeconomics is difficult to understand. Everyday is busy mow, but Summer vacation is coming up soon:)
24 Haz 2017 20:06
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June 24, 2017

It was sunny yesterday, but I did not go out. I studied Economics, English, {the use of a comma here is called the Oxford comma – it's not always used especially in casual writing but it is considered correct in formal English} and Chinese.
Yesterday was a very busy day. I was very tired, so I went to bed early last night.
I would like to write why I study these subjects.
First, I study English for the TOEIC test and English class. My English teacher gives students a lot of homework. I sometimes spend a whole day finishing my homework! In addition, she is a hard marker {I would say a hard grader but "hard marker" might be used in some non-American varieties of English}, so I can learn many things from her. I appreciate her.
Second, I study Chinese so I can pass HSK Grade six. I can speak Chinese but I am not good at writing. It's because maybe I don't use simplified Chinese characters, so I cannot remember it. Chinese is my mother's native language, so she teaches me difficult Chinese pronunciations and characters. All my family can speak Chinese, so I speak Chinese with my parents and grandparents. However, I always talk in Japanese with my sibling at home.
Third, I study economics for my term examination. I think microeconomics is difficult to understand.
Every day is busy now, but summer vacation is coming up soon:)

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24 Haziran 2017
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