My dog
My dog is called Star. She’s a beagle and she’s six years old. When she arrived at home she was one years old and she wasn’t as joker as the other dogs of the same age. She was depress and scared that someone could hit her. She considered a simple movement as a threat. We thought that perhaps the earlier owner often hit her and so she was so sad.
But in a few weeks she completely changed: she started to bark, she barked when she was hungry, and she was happy to take a stroll with us. And she still is now. She loves exspecially eating and hunting lizards. She eats dry food for dog every day, but we sometimes give her a few biscuits, when she deserves it of course! But she’s crazy about food and she even eats junk from the rubbish bin! If she saw a huge beef she’d eat it till finish every single piece.
When she’s in the garden she spends het time hunting lizards. But she likes also hunting cats: for example she is able to go up into a wall when she see a cat. And this is very dangerous because she isn’t a cat and she has not the same agility.
She learnt lots of games: she can give the paw, run and take the ball or remain firm for a biscuit.
What a good dog!
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My dog
My dog is called Star. She’s a beagle and she’s six years old. When she came to my home she was one year old and she wasn’t such a joker as the other dogs of the same age. She was depressed and scared that someone might hit her. She considered a simple movement as a threat. We thought that perhaps the previous owner often hit her and so she was so sad.But in a few weeks she completely changed: she started to bark, she barked when she was hungry, and she was happy to take a stroll with us. And she still is now. She loves exspecially eating and hunting lizards. She eats dry dog food every day, but we sometimes give her a few biscuits, when she deserves it, of course! But she’s crazy about food and she even eats junk from the rubbish bin! If she saw a huge piece of beef she’d eat it and finish every single piece.
When she’s in the garden she spends her time hunting lizards. But she likes also hunting cats: for example she is able to climb a wall when she sees a cat. And this is very dangerous because she isn’t a cat and has not the same agility.
She learnt lots of games: she can give the paw, run and take the ball or remain firm for a biscuit.
What a good dog!
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My dog
My dog is called Star. She’s a beagle and she’s six years old. When she arrived at home she was one years old and she wasn’t as joker happy? as the other dogs of the same age. She was depressed and scared that someone could would hit her. She considered a simple movement as a threat. We thought that perhaps the earlier former owner had often hit her and so that was why she was so sad.But in a few weeks she completely changed: she started to bark, she barked when she was hungry, and she was happy to take a stroll with us. And she still is now. She especially loves exspecially eating and hunting lizards. She eats dry dog food for dog every day, but we sometimes give her a few biscuits, when she deserves it of course! But she’s crazy about food and she even eats junk from the rubbish bin! If she saw a huge piece of beef she’d eat it till until finishing every single piece.
When she’s in the garden she spends her time hunting lizards. But she likes also hunting cats: for example she is able to go up into onto a wall when she sees a cat. And this is very dangerous because she isn’t a cat and she has not does not have the same agility.
She's learnt lots of games: she can give the paw, run and take the ball or remain firm for a biscuit.
What a good dog!
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