Essay #73 "Animal Rights" 31.03.18
Animal rights have become a hot topic in recent decades. It has divided people into those who think that using animals to satisfy their need is quite natural and those who think that animals should have the same rights as humans. In my opinion, treating animals as equal to humans is not a good idea that could be harmful for our society.
First of all, animals are used not only for food and making leather or fur clothes. They are used in chemical, medical, technological and other spheres, and without them many discoveries could not be made. So even if people do not eat meat they definitely make use of animals in some other ways. Also, employing animals as food source is quite natural for people and we have been doing it for many centuries. As humans are carnivores it is quite a strange idea to give up eating meat and radically change our diet.
People who think the opposite base their opinion on excessive cruelty against animals on farms and in use of experimental research in laboratories. They believe that all this is abuse of helpless animals and by giving more rights to them we could change the situation. Moreover, another reason is that people now are tending to have more animals as pets and they have become highly attached to them, so this makes them consider such things as unfair when employing and using animals just to satisfy human’ needs.
To conclude, people are omnivores who have been exploiting animals throughout all their history and trying to change this situation is not only irrational but also extremely hard to do without detrimental effects on our society. Animal use has become a pivotal part of industry, and medicine and human life as a whole. Thus, by putting animals on a par with themselves people are not only making their lives more complicated but also creating a misbalance in the natural ways of life.
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Essay #73 "Animal Rights" 31.03.18
Animal rights have become a hot topic in the recent decades. It has divided people into those who think that using animals to satisfy their need is quite natural and those who think that animals should have the same rights as humans. In my opinion, treating animals as equal to humans is not a good idea that could be harmful for our society.First of all, animals are used not only for food and making leather or fur clothes. They are used in chemical, medical, technological and other spheres, and without them many of discoveries could not be made. So even if people do not eat meat they definitely make use of animals in some other ways. Also, employing animals as food resource is quite natural for people and we have been doing it for many centuries. As humans are carnivores it is quite a strange idea to give up eating meat and radically change our diet.
People who think the opposite base their opinion on excessive cruelty against animals on farms and in use of experimental research in laboratories. They believe that all this is abuse of helpless animals and by giving more rights to them we could change the situation. Moreover, another reason is that people now are tending to have more animals as pets and they have become highly attached to them, so this makes them think about consider such things as unfairness when employing and using animals just for satisfying to satisfy humans’ needs.
To conclude, people are carnivores who have been exploiting animals throughout all their history and trying to change this situation is not only irrational but also extremely hard to do without detrimental effects on our society. Animal use has become a pivotal part of industry, medical, chemical industry and medicine and human life as a whole. Thus, by putting animals on (the same level with ) a par with themselves people are not only making their lives more complicated but also creating a misbalance in the natural ways of life.
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Essay #73 "Animal Rights" 31.03.18
Animal rights have become a hot topic in recent decades. It has divided us into those who think that using animals to satisfy our needs is quite natural and those who think that animals should have the same rights as humans. In my opinion, treating animals as equal to humans is not a good idea and could be harmful.First of all, animals are used not only for food and making leather or fur clothes. They are also used in chemical, medical, technological and other spheres, and without them many discoveries could not have been made. So even if people do not eat meat they definitely make use of animals in some other ways. Also eating animals is quite natural for us and we have done it for many centuries. As humans are carnivores* it is quite a strange idea to give up eating meat and radically changing our diet.
People who think the opposite base their opinion on excessive cruelty to animals on farms and in experimental research in laboratories. They believe that all these helpless animals are abused and that giving more rights to them will change the situation. Moreover, another reason is that people now are tending to have more animals as pets and they have become highly attached to them, so this makes them think about such things as the unfairness of using animals just to satisfy human needs.
To conclude, people are carnivores* who were employing animals throughout all their history and trying to change this situation is not only irrational but also extremely to do hard without hurting ourselves. Animal use has become a pivotal part in industry, medical, chemical industry and human life as a whole. Thus, by putting animals on the same level with themselves we are not only making their lives more complicated but also upsetting the natural ways of life.
*or, omnivores?
Very well written!
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Disclaimer!!! This essay does not fully represent my point of view. Also, as this essay had to agree with the IELTS essay structure it somewhat restricts the development of an idea and volume of the essay itself. Just in case readers will be too emotional about this topic.
Very well written!
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Very good explanation!
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Disclaimer!!!
This essay does not fully represent my point of view, also as this essay was written with respect to IELTS essay structure it puts some restriction to the development of an idea and volume of an essay itself.
Just in case if people will be too emotional about this topic.
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