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Hello Hello My name is Hao Ran Zhang. I'm 16 years old and a high school student.I'm a English-learner.I live in Zhou Shan, Zhengjiang,Chinese. I like reading,listening to music,play sachs and whatching movies. I want to make friends with people from all over the world. I'm good at writing Chinese articles. I'm happy to help you with Chinese.And I think we can help with each other.

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Hello
My name is Hao Ran Zhang.
I'm 16 years old and a high school student.I'm a English-learner(learning English).I live in Zhou Shan, Zhengjiang,Chinese(China).
I like reading,listening to music,play sachs(playing sachs,)and whatching(watching) movies.
I want to make friends with people from all over the world. 
I'm good at writing Chinese articles.
I'm happy to help you with Chinese.And I think we can help with each other.←(This sentence is good,but I think it should be "And I hope we can help each other.")

You did very well!Keep up the good work!(^-^)

Tip:"And" is usually not encouraged to begin a sentence in English. "But" is also the same way.
Don't worry about it though.Many English-speakers(particularly Americans) tend to use it that way.Especially if we have already finished a sentence beforehand and have forgotten extra information,after thoughts,etc.

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