my film
When i was young i saw films with my family . We liked Western Films. In te afternoon we usually watch tv en living romm with my granmother.
I remember a day when we watched the film "El Bueno, el Feo y el Malo- The Good, The Bad and The Ugly" . The main actor was Clint EastWood.
He was my Hero. When it finished i put my hate and toke my rifle and go out. I ran to bank near my house to seal it.
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my film
When i was young i (I) saw films with my family . We liked Western Films (films). In the afternoon we usually watch tv (TV) en (in the) living romm (room) with my granmother (grandmother).I remember a day when we watched the film "El Bueno, el Feo y el Malo- The Good, The Bad and The Ugly" . The main actor was Clint EastWood. (Eastwood)
He was my Hero (hero). When it finished i put my hate (did you mean, "got angry"?) and toke (took) my rifle and go (went)out. I ran to (the) bank near my house to s(t)eal it.
Capital letters are usually for proper nouns, like names, and also abbreviations (TV). Your grammar is very good! That last sentence was a surprise twist!
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