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I have a friend call Pablo.
My friend Pablo has a short, straight and brown hair and always he put gomina in his hair!!
He has two big brown eyes very expressive with big eyebrows in the top of his eyes.
He has a small mouth with white theets and pink tonge betwenn a short and brown beard and moustache.
He is taller than me and I'm overweight than he because he is very thin.
He is a happiness person because he try to do that other persons laughing with him and he DO IT!! When I see Pablo I'm all the day laughing.
Also Pablo is a nice person and knows about a lot of things like culture, music, cinema...
And today he has a white shirt with blue jeans. I love his style!
Another day I talk more about Pablo.
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I have a friend call Pablo.My friend Pablo has a short, straight and brown hair and always he put gomina in his hair!! Que es gomina?
He has two big brown eyes very expressive with big eyebrows in the top of his eyes.
Either: "he has two very expressive brown eyes" or "he has two - very expressive - brown eyes"
He has a small mouth with white teeth and pink tongue between a short, brown beard and a moustache.
He is taller than me and I'm overweight than he because he is very thin. No entiendo lo que quieres decir
He is a happy or happier person because he tries to make other people laugh with him and he DOES IT!! When I see Pablo I'm laughing all day.
Also Pablo is a nice person and knows about a lot of things like culture, music, cinema...
And today he has a white shirt with blue jeans. I love his style!
Another day I will talk more about Pablo.
Pablo sounds like a great guy!
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I have a friend named Pablo.My friend Pablo has a short, straight, brown hair and he always puts gel in his hair!!
( gomina = gel. Instead of 'gel' you can say "product" to refer to anything you use to style your hair - mousse, hair spray, gel, pomade - but it's slang. )
He has two big, brown eyes that are very expressive with big eyebrows. in the top of his eyes.
He has a small mouth with white teeth and pink tongue, and a short, brown beard and moustache.
He is taller than me, and I'm overweight but I weigh more than him, because he is very thin.
("to be overweight" means that someone is fat. I don't think that is what you meant. One person can weigh more than another without being fat)
He is a happiness happy person because he try to do that other persons laughing tries to get people to laugh with him and he does!! When I see Pablo, I laugh all day.
Also Pablo is a nice person and knows about a lot of things like culture, music, cinema...
And today Today he has is wearing a white shirt with blue jeans. I love his style!
Another day I will talk more about Pablo.
I like how you use details to paint a picture of your friend. Good job!
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