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Are these short sentences correct? 1) I want to become a doctor so that I can help a lot of people around here.

2) My wish is to build in my future an own family because I love big families.

3) I hope to write a good English class test tomorrow because I have put a lot of efforts into my English study.

(I have tom an English class test. Can someone correct these 3 sentences very early, please.):-)

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Are these short sentences correct?

1) I want to become a doctor so that I can help a lot of people around here. [grammatically correct, but doesn't sound quite right. Below may sound better:]


I want to become a doctor so that I can help a lot of people [here, in this city, in my city, in the community]


2) My wish is to build in my future an my own family in the future because I love big families.


3) I hope to write a good English class [redundant] test tomorrow because I have put lot of efforts lots of effort  [or a lot of effort] into studying English study.


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