Need comments for my writing skill I practice writing to improve my writing skill. Please read what I wrote and leave comments how I should do to improve my skill. Thanks! The topic I wrote is about argument: Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? The ice in the North Pole has been melting. The weather in every parts of the world has been changing. The whale die from plastics and trash people throw to the sea. These problems are what people destroy the Earth. In the past, the Earth is the best place people live. There are many natural resources that can be used and made. Nowadays, there are some people think that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Time has changed and people has also changed. Man-made things and technology play the role to make human change their behaviours. Humans want to live conveniently, so they start creating things and building habitats by using natural resources which cannot be reused. Deforestation is one of the examples that show how humans destroy the Earth. People need woods to make the things and need the spaces in the forest to build houses. This causes wild animals have no places to live and the ecosystem is imbalance. People do not realise how important of the Earth is. Other people think human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. It might be true in the past. that people care about the Earth, but now people take the advantage of natural resource as a greed. They destroy water resource, for example, in some countries, factory throw the wastewater into the river.