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My sister's misadventure It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang: it was my sister. She told me that 5 minutes ago she had saved a person from death. I asked her what happened and she told me that soon she would be at the hospital and asked me to reach her. When I got to the hospital, she had already left. So, I called her to ask where she had gone and what happened to the person she saved. But she didn’t answer so I asked the hospital receptionist and she told me that nobody came there that night. I went back home confused and I found my sister in front of the door. As soon as I saw her, I knew something was wrong. She told me that the man he had saved was a crook, he pretended to be hurt to steal her money while she was on the phone with me. I told her she had been lucky because he could have hurt her to get her money and she agreed but still was a little shocked. So I recommend her to immediately call the ambulance If she ever saw an injured person again, not only for her safety but also because if you don’t know how to do it, succor someone who is injured could hurt him even more.

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My sSister's mMisadventure

It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang:. It was my sister. She told me that 5 minutes ago she had saved a person from death. I asked her what happened and she told me that soon she would be at the hospital and asked me to reach her  come to her/come there/come/come and get her.
When I got to the hospital, she had already left. So, I called her to ask where she had gone and what happened to the person she (had) saved. But she didn’t answer so I asked the hospital receptionist and she told me that nobody came there that night. I went back home confused, and I found my sister in front of the door. As soon as I saw her, I knew something was wrong.
She told me that the man he had saved was a crook, . He pretended to be hurt to steal her money while she was on the phone with me. I told her she had been lucky because he could have hurt her to get her money, and she agreed but still was a little shocked.
So I recommend her immediately to call the ambulance I if she ever saw an injured person again, not only for her safety but also because if you don’t know how to do it, succoring* someone who is injured could hurt him even more.

*succor is an unusual word to use. The word is rarely used, and it is mostly used when discussing something related to war.

--Well done. I decided to make some punctuation changes, which I hope you don't mind.

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