looking forward to your correction, thanks. I signed in itaki today. i want to improve my English here, accually, i learned English for many years, but it's just fine.In the morning, i helped a foreig

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looking forward to your correction, thanks. I signed in itaki today. i want to improve my English here, accually, i learned English for many years, but it's just fine.In the morning, i helped a foreigner correct his chinese composition,which makes me kind of exciting.In the afternoon, i am going to work on my thesis.Anyway, it's my first time to express myself here .I would appreciate it if you help me with my English.

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Looking forward to your correction, thanks.

I signed in on to* itaki today. I want to improve my English here. Actually, I learned have studied English for many years, but it's just fine**. In the This morning, I helped a foreigner correct his Chinese composition, which makes me kind of exciting excited***. In the afternoon, I am going to work on my thesis. Anyway, it's my first time to express myself here. I would appreciate it if you help me with my English.

Welcome to italki! I've made some corrections, and there are explanations below. One important suggestion is to pay attention to punctuation. In particular, be sure to use upper-case "I" for 我 (don't use "i"), and insert a space after all sentences.

* "Signed on to" means (1) to join, or register for a website, as well as (2) to log on (登录)。

** "but it's just fine" - 你是什么意思？Usually "it's just fine" implies that your English is good enough, and you don't need to learn more.

*** 兴奋 can mean "exciting" or "excited" - They are both adjectives (形容词) but are used differently. "Excited" means that a person feels happy and enthusiastic about something (一个人对某事感到高兴和热情). "Exciting" means "it is something that made me feel excited (某事让人感到兴奋).

I signed up on itaki today. I want to improve my English here. Accually, I have learned English for many years, but it is still just fine/ok. In the morning, I felt excited because I helped a foreigner correct his chinese composition. In the afternoon, i am going to work on my thesis.Anyway, it's my first time to express myself here .I would appreciate it if you help me with my English.

Best wishes!

I am really happy. Thanks.

I would also give you a correction, 😃 but Anastasia covered it perfectly. I do hope you will further enjoy your time here on italki, learning English and helping others! 💐

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