Today, I went to school even though the weather was very hot. Walking outside in the heat made me tired, but I arrived at school on time. I attended my classes and listened carefully to the teachers. After school, I was happy to rest in a cool place. It was a hot day, but I was glad that I completed all of my classes.
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Today, I went to school even though the weather was very hot. Walking outside in the heat made me tired, but I arrived at school on time. I attended my classes and listened carefully to my teachers. After school, I was happy to rest in a cool place. It was a hot day, but I was glad that I completed all my classes.
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Your writing is fluent, clear, and well organised. You describe your experience naturally and use linking expressions effectively, such as “even though” and “but”. Your grammar and vocabulary are accurate, and only very minor stylistic improvements were needed. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
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