Today, I went to Shibuya with my friends after school. We ate some delicious food and enjoyed shopping together. I bought a few small things and had a great time talking with my friends. However, because it was Saturday, Shibuya was very crowded. There were so many people that I felt tired by the time I got home.
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Today, I went to Shibuya with my friends after school. We ate some delicious food and enjoyed shopping together. I bought a few small things and had a great time chatting with my friends. However, because it was Saturday, Shibuya was very crowded. There were so many people that I felt tired by the time I got home.
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