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1a. Thirsty years later, this precocious youth was to be the first President of the United States.
1b. Thirsty years later, this precocious young man was to be the first President of the United States.
Which is grammatically correct?
Which is better?
Do both have the same meaning?
What is difference between the meaning of these two sentences?
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As far as I can see, the only difference is that one sentence uses 'youth' and one sentence uses 'young man'. A youth is younger than a young man. We would call someone a youth when they are too old to be called a child but are not yet adult - mid to late teens. A young man is an adult.
The sentences have no grammatical differences. They are grammatically correct. 'Become' would be a more precise choice than 'be'.
Did you intend to write 'thirty' rather than 'thirsty'?
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I would argue that the intial clause framing the future event as thirty years hence, combined with an adjective such as "precocious" almost removes the need to refer to him as a "youth" or "young man".
You could get away with "this precocious individual", frankly. As it has a slightly tautological feel, in my opinion.
-thirty years later
-precocious
-young/youth
That said, B sounds better than A.
But perhaps the sentence is a little over engineered, feels a bit like you threw a thesaurus at it. I don't want to criticize it too heavily, I've read a lot worse written by fellow Englishman. It almost feels like you are showing off, though 😂 I love the word precocious, I actually used it a couple of days ago, though it was very tongue and cheek! It doesn't see a whole lot of use in common parlance.
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Hi Caxio, I agree with the descriptions below but I would add a couple of details.
Youth can mean young man but it is often used in a negative way:
"That youth over there is making so much noise"
If we compare that with your example we can assume that he is a noble and good person, considering that fact that he is about to become the president. So using "youth" sounds odd.
Compare:
"He is a lovely youth" - This sounds awkward because of the usual negative meaning of the noun youth
"He is a lovely young man" - Sounds much more natural
I would also like to add that youth is also commonly used to describe the quality of being young or the period of your life in which you are young:
"She was a talented artist in her youth"
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My first concern is the error using the word "thirsty". "Thirsty" is a descriptive word indicating a need to wet one's mouth, or satiate a desire to drink liquids. I believe you meant to use the written word for the number "30", which is "thirty". Secondly, I agree with the other answer provided by someone else earlier. The word "youth" is indicative of a child, as opposed to "young man" which implies that he is either of legal age, or he soon will be of legal age. Between the two options, I would choose to use option 1B.
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