Here are some suggestions for improving the natural flow and grammar of your sentences:
1. Original:âšYea, I also saw these reelsđ I think it shows that everyone can learn English and itâs accents if dedicate enough time and effort âșïž This girl is a real example. I donât know her background but I want to believe that we can learn English as well like she did đâš
Improved Version:âšYeah, I also saw these reels!đ I think they show that anyone can learn English and its accents if they dedicate enough time and effort.âșïž This girl is a great example. I donât know her background, but I want to believe that we can learn English just like she did.đâš
Explanation of changes:
* Changed "Yea" to "Yeah" for more common usage.
* Adjusted "itâs" to "its" because "its" is the possessive form.
* Added a subject, "they", in "if dedicate enough time" to make the sentence grammatically complete.
* Replaced "real example" with "great example" for a smoother and more natural expression.
* Simplified "as well like she did" to "just like she did" for conciseness.
2. Original:âšWhen you get to know her/him you will be disappointed.âšImproved Version:âšWhen you get to know them, you might be disappointed.âšExplanation of changes:
* Replaced "her/him" with "them" for a gender-neutral and smoother phrasing.
* Used "might" instead of "will" to soften the tone and make it sound less harsh or definitive.
Let me know if you want further tweaks! đ