“Milleniums were raise to thinking” → “Millennials were raised to think” (correct form of the verb). “study and word the most hardly possible” → “studying and working as hard as possible” (smoother). “can enough for give success” → “would be enough to bring success” (clearer and natural). “when it’s didn’t happen was created” → “when it didn’t happen, it created” (fixes grammar and keeps meaning). “psychiatrist issues” → “mental health issues” (the common phrase in English). Your original sentence shows strong ideas. These changes just help the grammar and flow.