I also have experience in Affiliate Marketing.

The sentence "I have experience in Affiliate Marketing" is too vague. You should provide more details regarding this experience. Who were you working for, what type of company was it, what kind of companies were the affiliates? What specifically did you do in Affiliate Marketing?

I would suggest, having seen your additional comment, that you put 'I have specific work experience in Affiliate Marketing', or 'I already have work experience in Affiliate Marketing'.

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Tnx! But the full message is: "I've come to know that your company is looking for Affiliate Manager and Account Manager, and I would like to apply for both the positions. I would like to mention that I have experience with Affiliate Marketing." So I try to write it more formally.