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How to make this sentence that I write sound more natural?
Though she is busy, by working harder, improving the efficiency of doing things and removing pointless activities from her life, she can squeeze time out of every second to write the paper that is important to her.2) Though she is busy, by working harder, improving the efficiency of doing things and removing pointless activities from her life, I'm pretty sure that she can squeeze time out of every second to write the paper that is important to her.
30 Ağu 2015 11:15
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Though she is busy, but by working harder, improving the efficiency of doing things and removing pointless activities from her life, I'm pretty sure that she can squeeze time out of every second to write the paper that is important to her.
30 Ağustos 2015
Oh sorry, I think I misunderstood the sentence.
30 Ağustos 2015
I'm not sure but I think you could exclude "by" and replace "second" with "day".
30 Ağustos 2015
The sentence does sound natural Shirleen. It's fine.
30 Ağustos 2015
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