is this okay?
I’d like to talk about a stage of life I enjoyed most, that is when I was 5 or 6 years old, living in my hometown with my grandparents for about two years.

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is this okay>?
I’d like to talk about a stage of life I enjoyed most, that is when I was 5 or 6 years old, living in my hometown with my grandparents for about two years.

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yes its good. but I would say "the stage my life"

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I’d like to talk about a stage of my life that I enjoyed ( myself)  most ; it is when I was 5 or 6 years old, living in my hometown with my grandparents for about two years .