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Is it correct ! We lost my cousin Soufian when he was five years old, we were all at my grandma's house eating a lunch and he went out alone . He was lost for two hours , but fortunetly my grandpa found him in the street and he was right [emoji][emoji]
10 Şub 2016 14:32
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Nearly, but there are one or two things to fix. You can't run on another main clause after that first comma; you must either replace it with a semicolon or a full stop / period. You also need a full stop after each of your other sentences. "Fortunately" is spelled thus, and it should be "he was alright" rather than "he was right".
10 Şubat 2016
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