Yaroslav
Hi , need help to check my cover letter on mistakes. Also please write synonyms of word capable ) Dear Human Resources Manager , My name is Yaroslav Dzendziura. I am writing to apply for the waiter position about which I heard from my friend Zelenskiy Dmitriy studying in EU Business School in Barcelona , Spain. I am enclosing my resume attached to this cover letter. This summer I will already have 18 and I think that it's time to work and show my parents that I can be independent. Secondly , given the fact that I'm studying on International Relations faculty it will be a useful and great chance to improve level of my english. I believe I am enough capable and experienced for this position. I previously worked at 80+ seat restaurant as a waiter ,whilst in that position I learned a lot about the role and I am now ready to progress my career further. But due to exam session in my university which lasts at 30 of June I will be able to start working only in middle of July and work till the middle of September. Yours sincerely ,
31 Oca 2017 11:01
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Hi Yaroslav, I hope you're well. I've copied your letter below with some of my suggestions about how it could be improved. I really hope you get the job! Feel free to message me should you have any further questions about anything, or if you'd like to discuss the letter in more depth - it might be useful to write a bit more about your previous work experience and mention how that could help you to be a success in the new job. Best wishes, Ross. Dear (Name), My name is Yaroslav Dzendziura. I am writing to apply for the position of waiter that I heard about from my friend Zelenskiy Dmitriy, who is studying at the EU Business School in Barcelona, Spain. I have attached my resume to this cover letter for your perusal. This summer, I will be 18 years old and I am looking for some part time work to show my parents that I can be independent. Moreover, given the fact that I'm studying International Relations, I believe that the role will provide me with a valuable opportunity to improve my English language skills, as I will be able to interact with customers and other staff members on a daily basis. I strongly believe that I have the experience and the ability to be successful within this position, as I previously worked at a busy restaurant as a waiter (add location > specific details), and whilst doing that job I learned a lot of key skills (perhaps add a few of the skills that you learned - time keeping, proficient customer service, team work etc.) Due to university commitments and my exam timetable, I will be able to start working in July. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and please get in touch should you have any questions regarding my application. Yours faithfully, (Name > contact details)
31 Ocak 2017
Hi Yaroslav, I hope you're well. I've copied your letter below with some of my suggestions about how it could be improved. I really hope you get the job! Feel free to message me should you have any further questions about anything, or if you'd like to discuss the letter in more depth - it might be useful to write a bit more about your previous work experience and mention how that could help you to be a success in the new job. Best wishes, Ross. Dear (Name), My name is Yaroslav Dzendziura. I am writing to apply for the position of waiter that I heard about from my friend Zelenskiy Dmitriy, who is studying at the EU Business School in Barcelona, Spain. I have attached my resume to this cover letter for your perusal. This summer, I will be 18 years old and I am looking for some part time work to show my parents that I can be independent. Moreover, given the fact that I'm studying International Relations, I believe that the role will provide me with a valuable opportunity to improve my English language skills, as I will be able to interact with customers and other staff members on a daily basis. I strongly believe that I have the experience and the ability to be successful within this position, as I previously worked at a busy restaurant as a waiter (add location & specific details), and whilst doing that job I learned a lot of key skills (perhaps add a few of the skills that you learned - time keeping, proficient customer service, team work etc.) Due to university commitments and my exam timetable, I will be able to start working in July. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and please get in touch should you have any questions regarding my application. Yours faithfully, (Name & contact details)
31 Ocak 2017
Also I would like to write something like that it would be good if he would hire me and my friend for this position , but don't know how to write it on English. Thanks in advance )
31 Ocak 2017
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