Calla Lily
A factory which pollutes air should be fined/punished heavily Hi there, could you please review this to see if it makes sense? 1. I mostly agree it's more important to be happy in my job than earning a large salary. 2. It's easy to be addicted to the Internet for children. 3. A factory which pollutes air should be fined/punished heavily. Thank you so much for your help!
8 Şub 2017 13:48
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1. I mostly agree it's more important to be happy in my job than earning a large salary. <OK, but I would use a comma between "my job, than earning a large salary"> 2. It's easy to be addicted to the Internet for children. 3. A factory which pollutes air should be fined/punished heavily.
8 Şubat 2017
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