Ana Wong
Does it sound natural? It's where our friendship was put an end when I noticed that you were no different (difference?) from those bastard we've hated.
19 Mar 2017 12:43
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Very close! Nice work. If you adjust it just a bit, it will be perfect. Our friendship was put to an end when I noticed that you were no different from those bastards we've hated. The words, 'it's where' is not needed because you already have when in the sentence that shows the meaning/context. You want to use different because you are describing so you need the adjective, not the noun (difference is a noun). You need an s on bastard because you said those, which is more than one. Good luck!
19 Mart 2017
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