Antonio
this sounds good? if you are a technology fan like us, here you will find clothes and other cool goods that looks like you.
12 Kas 2017 02:37
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"Does this sound good?" (Please remember proper question forms. This isn't an option.) Here's my suggestion: "If you're a technology fan like us, here you'll find clothes and other cool stuff that you'll like." I've added contractions because the whole sentence sounds a bit better with a "spoken tone". However, I'm not sure if I understood the end of your sentence. You literally wrote "...other cool goods that are physically similar to you", but I'm sure you meant things that will appeal to the reader, or things that the reader will enjoy.
12 Kasım 2017
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