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What's the meaning of this sentence? Are some words redundence? The field of health geography is often overlooked, but it constitutes a huge area of need in the fields of geography and healthcare.
20 Haz 2018 23:57
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I think it sounds a bit redundant, but it's not incorrect at all. Something like "The field of health geography is often overlooked, but it constitutes a huge area of need in the two fields it entails." or "The field of health geography is often overlooked, but it constitutes a huge area of need in healthcare around the world." might be more concise.
21 Haziran 2018
To my ears, it doesn't sound redundant. It expands on the meaning of health geography.
21 Haziran 2018
Thank you.
21 Haziran 2018
I like to use " although " instead of " but " .. You can also say " huge area of need for both geography and healthcare.
21 Haziran 2018
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