この文は大丈夫ですか？
竹は、地下に広範なルートシステムを構築し、6週間以内に90フィートの高さまで急速に成長するため、最初の5年間はほとんど見えません。

("Bamboo can barely be seen for the first 5 years as it builds extensive root systems underground before exploding 90 feet into the air within six weeks." - James Clear)

ありがごうございます。 Thank you in advance for your time and help.

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この文は大丈夫ですか？
竹は、地下に広範なルートシステムを構築し、6週間以内に90フィートの高さまで急速に成長するため、最初の5年間はほとんど見えません。

("Bamboo can barely be seen for the first 5 years as it builds extensive root systems underground before  exploding 90 feet into the air within six weeks." - James Clear)

ありがごうございます。 Thank you in advance for your time and help.

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竹は地下に広範囲な根を構築した後、6週間の間に空に向かって90フィート急成長するため、最初の5年間はほとんど見えません。
I'm glad if I could help you.

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Thank you for the heads up (and all your help even on other questions), Chii-さん! どうぞ、よろしくおねがいします！

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Thank you for the information, Uedaさん!

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You might as well change the order of the clauses as follows. / 竹は、6週間以内に90フィートの高さまで急速に成長する前は、地下で〔ひたすら〕広範なルートシステムを構築しているため、最初の5年間はほとんど見えません。/ I suppose this is more natural.

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You could say as you did above, though some people might feel it a bit weird because it sounds like you can hardly ever see bamboos not because they are just building their root systems under the ground for a long time but because they grow very fast in such a short period as six weeks.

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