Farhana Qureishi
Is this sentence grammatically correct and natural enough? ▪ After dinner, the artful counselor told the campers that there was a madman loose in the woods, thus causing them to lie quietly in the tent.
14 Kas 2023 17:53
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I don’t understand what an “artful” counselor would mean. “Causing” doesn’t seem right. What caused them to lie quietly? Their fear? The orders of the counselor? If “cause” is the word you want to use, then make it a verb and give it a subject. (“Causing” is an adjective and I cannot figure out which noun it modifies.)
14 Kasım 2023
Yes, it’s fine.
14 Kasım 2023
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