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I went to Okayama with my cousin and my grandfather by bullet train. My relatives live there. On the first day, we visited the top of mountain and saw the famous bridge. After that we went my relatives home. She made Bean mochi and red rice for us. They were so delicious. It’s really in the countryside so we can see a lot of stars. Next day, we visited a shrine in Okayama. There was a tree that looked like a dragon and a snake. We ate udon for lunch and it was good. At night we had a barbecue at their house. My second cousin came to see us and talked a lot. We spent a really great time. I decided to stay there longer next time.
14 Eki 2025 04:16
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I went to Okayama with my cousin and my grandfather by bullet train. My relatives live there. On the first day, we climbed to the top of the mountain and saw the famous bridge. After that we went to my relatives home. She made Bean mochi and red rice for us. They were so delicious. It’s really in the countryside so we can see a lot of stars. The Next day, we visited a shrine in Okayama. There was a tree that looked like a dragon and a snake. We ate udon for lunch and it was good. At night we had a barbecue at their house. My second cousin came to see us and we talked a lot. We had a really great time. I want to stay there longer next time.
良く書けていますよ!特に添削するところはないと思います。いとこさんとの良い岡山の旅行みたいでよかったです。そこで夜空をはっきり見えるのですか?素晴らしいです。日本では、夜空を良く見える地域を探しています🧐 日本に旅行したら、岡山に行ってみます!!
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