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This is my homework, informative writing.I want to know what could be corrected.Please help me.Thank you. The table illustrates the number of college enrollment each year from 1997 to2005, while the line graph compares the number of three categories of universityenrollment in the course of those years. The table outlines that the enrollmentof college enrollment changes every year. The most enrollment of the first-category universities in the course of those years is 700 000. And the most enrollment of the second-category universities in the course of those years is 1, 670, 000. In 2003, the third-category universities started enrollingstudents. The line graph shows that three categories universities enrollment varied during those years. The first-category universities had a slight growth from 1997 to 2000. Starting from 2001 the number had increased slowly. The number of second-category universities increased at a quicker rate from 1997 to 2005. In 2005, the third-category universities enrolled students and increased at a uniform fast rate. Generally, in order to continue reforming reasonably, we should make unremitting efforts.
9 Nis 2023 12:21
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The table illustrates the number of college enrollments each year from 1997 to 2005, while the line graph compares the number of three categories of university enrollments during those years. The table shows that college enrollment varied each year, with the highest enrollment for first-category universities being 700,000 and for second-category universities being 1,670,000. In 2003, third-category universities began enrolling students. The line graph shows that the enrollments of the three categories of universities varied during those years. The first-category universities had a slight growth from 1997 to 2000, and then increased slowly from 2001. The number of second-category universities increased at a quicker rate from 1997 to 2005. In 2005, third-category universities enrolled students and increased at a uniformly fast rate. To continue reforming reasonably, we should make unremitting efforts.
The text has been corrected to improve grammar, sentence structure, and clarity. However, it still lacks a clear purpose or context for why this information is important. In addition, it would be helpful to provide more specific suggestions for what kinds of efforts are needed for reforming. Try to provide more context and details to make the text more informative and useful.
9 Nisan 2023
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