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Many people think that higher education is necessary for everybody, but others claim that it is a waste of time. Now I would like to express my point of view about higher education.
Higher education in my opinion is one of the most important things at nowadays. The first thing that needs to be said is that if you have a Tertiary education, you have considerably more opportunities for getting highly paid work than without it. Secondly, students who have graduated from university, acquire more knowledge than people who not. Furthermore, one should not forget that studying at university expands the horizons and raise the cultural level considerably more than if you study at specialized school.
However, some people think that they have more chances be demanded and find a high paid job than people with higher education. I cannot agree with this statement, I believe that only an educated person can get a good job and be promoted. Furthermore, it is often said that studying at the University takes a lot of time and doesn’t give any knowledge. They fail to consider that for this long time, it gives people considerably more knowledge and possibilities for their future. Finally, many people say that Tertiary education is very expansive and it is undeniable that it is true. The other side of the coin is that you and your family can work for university and lose weight together, because all money goes for your study. I think it is really good.
There are different points of view on this problem .To draw the conclusion , I can say that everybody must realize the importance of Higher education as it is a guarantee of development and well-being in our society.
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Give me any synonyms for HIGHER EDUCATION please))
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can you find any mistakes in my essay?)please:))
Some people think that young people become more serious and sensible getting the pocket money. Others claim that teenagers can not deal with money and spend it unwisely and believe that they always buy useless things. Now I would like to express my point of view on the problem of pocket money.
Pocket money, in my opinion is very useful for teenagers. I think that pocket money helps children to learn how to plan their budget. Teenagers always want to spend their money on many things, but the amount of money is limited. Furthermore, young people begin to understand the value of money. It helps them to realize what kind of job to choose in future to earn enough money for everything they want to get.
On the other hand, many people think that teenagers waste money. I can not agree with this argument because most of us spend our money on very useful things. We buy food because we spend a lot of time at school. Teenagers buy clothes because look smart is very important today. We pay for the mobile phones and internet because without it we can not study. Moreover many people are in favour of idea how difficult to earn money in our days. I disagree because adults forget that most of us have part time job and of course we realize that to make good money we have to be hardworking ,responsible and diligent.
Taking everything into consideration, there are two different points of view on this problem. To my mind parents should give their children pocket money and do not care how do they spend it (of course it is not about drugs and alcohol). I am sure that sensible spending of it teaches them a lot.
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I have wrote essay "My oppinion about pocket money", can you correct me if something wrong,please!:)
Some people think that young people become more serious and sensible getting the pocket money. Others claim that teenagers can not deal with money and spend it unwisely and believe that they always buy useless things. Now I would like to express my point of view on the problem of pocket money.
Pocket money, in my opinion is very useful for teenagers. I think that pocket money helps children to learn how to plan their budget. Teenagers always want to spend their money on many things, but the amount of money is limited. Furthermore, young people begin to understand the value of money. It helps them to realize what kind of job to choose in future to earn enough money for everything they want to get.
On the other hand, many people think that teenagers waste money. I can not agree with this argument because most of us spend our money on very useful things. We buy food because we spend a lot of time at school. Teenagers buy clothes because look smart is very important today. We pay for the mobile phones and internet because without it we can not study. Moreover many people are in favour of idea how difficult to earn money in our days. I disagree because adults forget that most of us have part time job and of course we realize that to make good money we have to be hardworking ,responsible and diligent.
Taking everything into consideration, there are two different points of view on this problem. To my mind parents should give their children pocket money and do not care how do they spend it (of course it is not about drugs and alcohol). I am sure that sensible spending of it teaches them a lot.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English, because I want to enter the university and then be an interpreter. More than that I want to find english-speaking friends:)
My native language is Russian,and I grew up in Russia.
I enjoy reading,playing the guitar and the piano and of course I like studying English:)
I`ll be glad if you`ll write me:)
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