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For citizens, is tax paying a big enough contribution to their society?
i just wrote an article. can somebody help me revision it? and is it proper to call it " article"? :P
Paying tax through handing some incomes of individuals in to the local authority contributes to the local government’s basic revenue, which plays an essential role in the development of our society. Governments must allocate money, the tax revenue coming from citizens, to programs such as public transportation, healthy care service and the insurance for the retirement, thereby improving people’s living standard. Also, with this money, it is possible for governments to withstand destabilizing factors like terrorism. It seems that individuals can fulfill their duty as civilians through taxpaying, because social development and stability rely on taxes in a great deal.
However, some people argue that only paying taxes is not enough. Due to the intensive social rivalry and increasing living cost, individuals are suffering from significant pressure of modern life and money become an important part of our life. If people only focus on money, it is conceivable that individuals become indifferent to each other and thus the social cohesion and harmony will be undermined. So we have responsibility to devote ourselves to actions that help facilitate social harmony.
In my opinion, for citizens, there are lots of ways that contribute to local community, such as volunteering for a social service job, being a teacher in rural areas as well as paying tax. We do need to give priority to taxpaying, because we are facing countless dilemmas such as the widening wealth gap, the resources wastes and the reconsidering of the alternative energy like unclear power, all of which need capital to ameliorate. However, it is short-sighted to deem the taxpaying as the entire obligation for members of our society. In fact, we should boost our social prosperity in both material aspect and spiritual aspect.
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a book or a film about the future you read or watched
this is a topic of ielts verbal test. i prepare it as follows:
[The film called “cyborg she” is a memorable film for me. I watched it last year.
The film begins with an encounter between J and a strange girl who gives J the most unforgettable day in his life but leaved soon.
The story then jumps to one year later and J meet that mystery girl again. But this time she is different. she reveals her true identity by showing him a 3D projection of J’s own future appearance as a more aged person who spent all his time to create a cyborg who looks the same as that mystery girl and let her travel through time to meet the present J, cause he miss her so much. And the old J warns present J about an upcoming disaster in which the cyborg girl will die for saving J. and eventually it really happens. Distraughtly, J spends the next 70 years trying to rebuild her. He eventually succeeds, although he passes away soon afterwards.
This film is more than anything a work of creative imagination. It is filled with enduring love and tear-shedding plot. They touch the bottom of your heart. When I finished the film, I was moved by the set pieces that distill the story’s eternal love to its essence. ]
can you give me a score from 0 to 9 ? thank you :)
12 Şubat 2013
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm preparing for the ielts test for the sake of studying abroad.
My native language is chinese, and i grew up in Tianjin, a beautiful coastal city of China.
I enjoy yoga, bellydance and photography.
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