Can someone help me to correct my story? URGENT The story is for a class and I have few time! If someone can help me it would be perfect! THANKS! "Once upon a time there was a boy that dreamed of flying. He watched the sky everydays and looked sadly the flight of the birds. (Boy): I want to be like them. But I can't. I'm only a human. He allways returned at home with pain in his heart. One day, when he was walking on the street, he saw a butterfly that was flying close to him. He followed it and suddenly he ran into an old woman. (Boy): - Excuse me. (Old woman): - Don't worry little boy. I know what do you want. (Boy): - And what do I want? (Old woman): - You want to fly. (Boy): - And how do you know it? (Old woman): - Jajaja... I'm a witch and I know a lot of things. (Boy): - Then... You can make me fly! (Old woman): - You can fly whenever you want. (Boy): - No! I can't! I can't fly like a bird. (Old woman): But you can fly like a human. (Boy): And how can I do it? (Old woman): - You only need to use your imagination. The old woman smiled at the boy and walked down the street. He thought about the words that the old woman said to him and he tried to do it. He saw the sky other again and he flew with his mind away from there. (Boy): - I like it. Maybe it's better than flying like a bird."