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Has the ease of cooking improved life?
As per Maslow’s hierarchy need food is our very basic need. Food is necessity of not only humans but also all living creature on earth. Since ancient times humans have striven hard to get his basic need fulfilled. Humans used to eat raw food initially then eating habits have gradually evolved.
As we all know that in ancient era humans had to hunt for food, as the time passed we learnt to grow our own food, we learnt to cook food. I think cooking made our life easy; comfortable. It increased our security because it’s readily available in market we just have to buy it and cook. It saved our time.
Another important reason is that cooking has increased many job opportunities. Nowadays attitude towards life is changing. People have started enjoying food beyond their basic need and this resulted into opening of many restaurants. Also these restaurants are helpful for those who don’t get time to cook at home. It becomes revenue generation source and this business set up has created many job opportunities.
Additionally, need for trained professional increased, so Hotel management colleges and university has started educating and training students in cooking. These colleges not only teach how to cook but also educate on nutritional values of food. It widens student’s career option.
In conclusion, I wish to say that cooking gave us variety in food. It gave us knowledge on nutritional value. It changed our attitude toward food beyond basic need; ultimately it made our life easy, comfortable, secure, and interesting.
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Hi, Plz help me with correcting my essay on Why to go to university?
In my opinion Universities are the places where we get knowledge. Here we learn by listening, observing, interacting. Students get interacted with each other.
The reason I prefer why everyone should go for University is that we get big platform to share the knowledge. Sharing between students, sharing between student and professor increases knowledge. Presentations, group discussion are effective means of knowledge transfer
I think, In universities we get knowledge of not only our interested subjects but others too. If we decided to learn on our own, its unlikely that we will go for the subjects other than our interest. Here we get introduced with all subjects. Though someone is not interested in maths, he will learn maths- at least one which is required in day to day life
Another example is our queries get solved by qualified professors. It’s always better to clear your doubts than to remain in confusion. Professors are there to help students in their studies
Additionally, at university we are assessed on many different parameters; Like in exams we are assessed on academic parameters; in projects we are assessed on interpersonal skill. From these assessments we come to know, where we are good and where we are lacking.
Furthermore, many extra-curricular activities takes place, universities just don’t developed us academically. There are many activities like poster competition, quiz competition. These extra-curricular activities assess us on creativity, Initiation, leadership qualities. The one who is good at these skills, gets chance to work on it, the one who lacks inn it, gets opportunity to improve it.
Finally, universities are the places where we can get so many different subjects, where we can grow, we can prosper
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