Bullying at school Hello. I wrote an entry about school bullying because I thought it is a highly-importnat topic and I'd very much like to receive your opinions on it. Also, if I made any mistakes, I'd be thankful if you could correct me. Thank you all in advance. My entry: I believe that the rules that exist in schools nowadays aren't enough and that some more should be invented in order to control violence in schools. For instance, let's take a look at bullying. Currently, almost every student would admit that they've experienced at least one incident of buylling. Buylling has almost always been around, but today with all the social websites, such as Facebook, Twitter and so on, it seems as if bullying is an easy thing to do, in order to get social acceptance, popularity and control. In my opinion, the system doesn't seem to do enough to stop this issue. Kids are afraid to go to school, to talk and apply for help. In conclusion there are more actions that need to be done in order to end the violence, once and for all.

Public transportation with no cost Hello I wrote a passage about chancing public transportation to free of charge. I'd be grateful if there was someone on here who could check my entry and correct the mistakes that I might have made. And of course receiving your opinion about my entry. Thank you all in advance. My entry: In my view public transportation should be free of charge. To begin with, citzens pay a lot of money to the rule. They pay almost for any service they receive: electiricity, water, health insurance and so on. But on the other hand, the citizens aren't given anything for free back, for instance - a bonus for paying all your bills on time. Thereby, there's a feeling among many citizens, of being "used" by the government. They go to work, pay the bills, pay for anything they need - and they don't really get anything for free. To sum it up, exempting the public from paying public transporation fare may encourage and spur the last to feel better with the authorities, which, in turn, may even improve the interaction between both sides.

Why do I think anyone should learn a foreign language Hi everybody I wrote a short entry about my opinion on learning a foreign language. I would very much like to receive your opinions about my passage, your own opinion about learning another language - what drove you to do so? And of course, whether I made mistakes in my writing, I'd like if you could correct them. A big thanks in advance. My entry: In my opinion every person should develop skills at language-learning. Firstly, many people love to travel around the world. While traveling, a person get to know a new society, new viewpoints, and a new language. In order to adjust as quickly as possible to the new envvironment, first we have to communicate. Communication is made by several ways: we can make eye contact, we can express ourselves with body sings and can point at the things that we want but we will never be able to reach a full communication without speaking the vernacular. Another advantage is the process itself - by learning a second language we develop our intelligence, exercise our brains and cause ourselves feel useful. In conclusion,learning a foreign language is an end in itself and high-value goal that everybody should adopt to themselves.

Highest pay goes to... Hello, I wrote an entry about which profession I think should get the highest pay? I would really like if you could provide your opinions and corrections, if need be, of course. Thanks! In my view the profession that should receive the highest pay is the medical staff. One major reason to economically support the medical staff more than anyone else is its work per se. Medical staff constantly exposes itself to danger, since contagious diseases are always a part of the job. Furthermore, by choosing to hazard themselves, the people who belong to the medical staff, reveal their families to danger of contamination as well. In addition to that, the work isn't easy whatsoever: everyday the medical personnel must deal with sudden crises and serious health problems. They are forced to live with the notion that the future of many lives actually depend on them and their professional decisions. In conclusion, the medical personnel is deserved to receive the highest pay for what they grant us day after day. The End.

The government's money Hello I wrote an entry about where I think my government should be invested its money. I would like to get your opinions about my entry. Of course, if you could correct my mistakes in case that I made some, I'll be grateful and what would you say - where the money of your government should be invested first? Thank you everyone!! My entry: "I personally think that more money should be invested by the government in unemployment. To begin with, every year more people lose their jobs and become unemployeds. When adults stop having a permanent job to attend, a big part of them would feel worthless. Their self esteem lessen, arguments become more frequent at home. Families fall apart, some couples get divorced. In order to help the sole parent that left alone, a part of the kids can be stealing food, clothes, etc. Another repercussion is that some families lose their homes and become homeless. Without help of the government, those families probably won't be able to afford a new home. The homeless circle and the social problem only increase. In conclusion, I think that in order to break the cycle, more money must be given to resolve this never-ending unemployment issue. The end.

Do you think the external look may indicate an important information about a person? Hello everybody. I wrote the following passage and would really like to know what do you think about this topic, do you agree or disagree with me? Also, if there is someone on here who can help me to find out if I committed some errors and help me correct them, I will be truly grateful. Thank you!! My entry: In my opinion, external appearance won't provide any important information about a person. A lot has been said about people's appearances and the importance of it. The magazines, the television channels, ads, billboards are all telling us how we should look, weigh, exercise, dress and so on. Almost nobody mentions the fact that we all own more important thing that would tell us such more about a person - the soul. Hence, my point of view is that believing that the external appearance might tell you anything valuable about a person, would be an enormous mistake. By believing this you help the media decide for us what kind of view we want to have, what type of friends we want to meet, what sort of society we are. All things considered, I'd give each person the opportunity to be my friend via anything but appearance. The End.

The External Appearance Hello everyone. I have written a short entry about the external look and its importance. I would be thankful if someone could go over that,correct my mistakes and give your own opinion about my entry. Thank you all in advance, My entry: In my opinion, external appearance won't provide any important information about a person. A lot has been said about the look and the importance of it. The magazines, television channels, ads, billboards are all telling us how we should look, weigh, eat, exercise, dress and so on. Nobody mentions the fact that we all share more important thing that would tell us such more about a person - the soul. Hence,believing that the external appearance might tell you anything valuable about a person, would be an enormous mistake. By believing this you may contribute to the low self esteem that a person in front of you may have. You help the media decide for us what kind of view we want to have, what type of friends we want to keep, what sort of society we are.

Which do you prefer: a higher-paying job w/ long hours or a lower paycheck but shorter hours? Hello everyone. I am really curious to know! Which do you think is preferable: a higher-paying job with long working hours, or a lower-paying job with shorter hours? And why? I also wrote an entry based on my own opinion. I'd be thankful if someone could read it and help me if I did any mistakes. Thank you all :) My entry: If I ever asked to choose between higher-paying job with long working hours, or a lower-paying job with shorter hours, I'd choose the second option. I'd choose a lower salary with less working hours because I believe people should have some spare time for themselves. For instance, many families have fallen apart, since women have gotten equal rights at work. Women nowadays are allowed to work for longer hours than before, and earn more money for that. Kids are left all alone after school, expected to take care of themselves and their little siblings simultaneously. Consequently, the crime and negligence rates increase; the mothers bring home more money, but less attention for their kids after long hard day at work. Taking everything into account, as a woman, I'd choose to work for less money but more hours with my own kids. The end.