can you please correct grammar in this essay??ㅠㅠ How many people can play the gayagem, the Korean traditional string instrument? A traditional Korean instrument class would provide students with chances to play a variety of Korean traditional instruments such as gayagem, daegem and even the instruments that students haven’t heard their name before. The University should set up a new course on learning how to play Korean traditional instruments because there would be emotional benefits for all students who participate in and benefits for our whole community. Not only students can have composure from this course, but this course also can contribute to preservation of our traditions. Firstly, by playing Korean traditional instruments, students can relieve the stress from studying. Today’s many college students are exhausted because of hard works such as vast amount of homework and exams. Students can rest and alleviate their stress when performing traditional music with the instruments. For example, Gayagem Sanjo is one of the Korean traditional music, known for its slow tempo and peaceful melody. Students can feel the comfort and relaxation from the slow tempo music. Also, they can learn how to handle their stress in the process of playing the instruments. Thus, it is helpful for students to learn how to play Korean traditional instruments because students can have time to relax during playing the instruments. Secondly, playing Korean traditional instruments can help our society to preserve our own tradition. Nowadays, many Korean cultures are disappearing and being forgotten. Playing these instruments makes students to feel the spirit of our ancients different from that of western’s, and then can prevent our traditions from being forgotten. For instance, many young people don’t know about Haegem, the Korean traditional string instrument, and also they have not listened to the performance of this instrument. If students can have class to learn how to play the Haegem and get interests from it, it can be the good chance for the instruments to be spread out to young people. Therefore, teaching how to play the Korean traditional instruments can help our traditions to be transmitted to young generation, in the long run.