Could someone please correct my essay? (part 2) Sweet Tamagoyaki normally contains lots of sugar and Mirin in it. They are mainly eaten in eastern Japan including Tokyo and also in some big cities in western Japan such as Hiroshima, Fukuoka and Kagoshima. In the old days sugar was very expensive and only rich people could afford it. Owning lots of sugar was considered as a way to show off their power and wealth. Kagoshima used to govern Amami region where was famous for brown sugar and people there had a plenty of them. They put lots of sugar into their food and stared to think that the amount of sugar decides the deliciousness of food. There is no doubt they prefer sweet Tamagoyaki. It is also said that they took sugar to the capital and prepared sweet Tamagoyaki for rich people there. People in Edo found that sweet Tamagoyaki was an ideal ingredient for Sushi and Tamago-zushi was invented. On the other hand, salty Tamagoyaki contains soy sauce, salt and Mentsuyu. Tonkatsu sauce is also used as an ingredient sometimes. Salty Tamagoyaki is mainly eaten in western Japan, especially in the west of Fukui, Gifu and Mie prefectures, but it is not as popular as sweet ones. It is believed that salty Tamagoyaki was invented in Kansai region where people has the Dashi culture because of Kyo-kaiseki. People used to use stock to make Tamagoyaki but eventually started to think it took too much time and then put salt and soy sauce instead. They also invented Dashimaki-Tamago, which contains more stock and some potato starch, by getting an idea from salty Tamagoyaki. Today most of the famous Dashimaki-Tamago shops are in or originally from Kyoto. Both sweet Tamagoyaki and salty Tamagoyaki have very interesting backgrounds. Sweet Tamagoyaki was the symbol of their wealth in eastern Japan and some big cities while salty ones were invented by people in Kansai region who loved their stock culture. Both types of Tamagoyaki have been loved by Japanese people for generations. Thank you very much!

Could someone please correct my essay? (part 1) The History and Variations of Tamagoyaki Tamagoyaki or Japanese Omelet is one of the most famous Japanese dishes made of eggs. It is also known as a popular side dish for Obento. While there is a variety of similar egg dishes such as scrambled eggs or omelets in the world, Tamagoyaki was originally invented in Japan and it is made by a very unique method. Until the Edo period the Japanese did not have a custom to eat eggs everyday. Some people owned chickens but they were not for eating but for fighting. When Western people, especially Portuguese and Spanish people came to Japan during the Sengoku period, they brought egg dishes and cakes to Japan and showed Japanese people how to make them. It was the first time the egg-eating culture was introduced to Japan. During the mid-Edo period, the custom of eating eggs started among the common people and even a cookery book specialised for eggs was published in 1785. The book contains 103 recipes of egg dishes. However modern Tamagoyaki had not been invented at that time. Although Tamagoyaki is eaten all over Japan, there are roughly two types of them, Sweet ones and salty ones. According to the survey by J Townnet in 2015, 58.7 per cent of Japanese people prefers sweet Tamagayaki while the rest of 41.3 per cent prefers salty ones. So what are the differences between them? Thank you!

Könnte jemand bitte diese Sätze korrigieren? Hallo, ich möchte zu meiner Gastfamilie eine Karte schreiben. Kann jemand bitte sie nachsehen? (* I'm still with them. And I prefer "Siezen", they are much older than me.) ************ Liebe Peter, Anna, und Laura, Ich danke Ihnen dafür, dass ich für 17 monate bei Ihnen bleiben konnte. Ich habe meinen Aufenthalt in Deutshland wirklich genossen. Bitte lassen Sie mich wissen, wenn Sie nach Japan kommen. (* They are definitely going to Japan in near future.) Vielen Dank und aufwiedersehen! ************* Vielen Dank für Ihre Hilfe! Ako

Mein vierter Tagebucheintrag Hallo, heute möchte ich über meine Familie schreiben. Ich habe Eltern und zwei Schwestern. Meine Mutter war Musiklehrerin, aber jetzt ist sie Hausfrau und kümmert ihr um meinen Vater. Er ist Polizist und wohnt in Hiroshima. Meine Schwestern heißen Satomi und Momoko. Satomi ist 26 Jahre alt und arbeitet als Kindergärtnerin. Sie hat einen Freund und sie werden im Oktober heiraten. Momoko ist noch Studentin und wohnt in Kyoto. Sie studiert die Japanische Literatur, aber hat Heimweh und will nach Hause. Ich habe zwei Großväter und eine Großmutter auch. Sie sind Rentner und leben in Hiroshima und Fukuoka. Could anyone please correct these sentences? Danke schön!

Mein dritter Tagebucheintrag Hallo, ich bin Japanerin und wohne in Düsseldorf als Aupair. Ich kümmere mich um eine Mädchen. Ihr name ist Saja. Sie hat eine Deutsche Mutter und ein Japanischer Vater. Heute Morgen haben wir um 7 Uhr gestanden und gefrühstückt. Der Vater war da aber die Mutter war in Rom. Nach dem Frühstück habe ich Saja zur Schule gebracht. Am Nachmittag habe ich gearbeitet und um 3 Uhr Saja abgeholt. Wir haben vor der Schule Eis gegessen und sind in dem Supermarkt gegangen. Could anyone please correct these sentences? Vielen Dank :)

Mein zweiter Tagebucheintrag Ich bin heute um 10 Uhr aufgestanden und habe geduscht. Ich habe kein Frühstück gegessen. Nachmittag habe ich meine Reise vorbereiten. Mein Freund und ich gehen nach Bonn und Aachen von Donnerstag bis Samstag. Am abend habe ich mit meiner Familie in einem Restaurant Spaghetti gegessen. (I had spaghetti at a restaurant with my family in the evening.) Ich muss morgen um 7 Uhr aufstehen, weil ich arbeite. Could you please correct these sentences? Thank you very much! :)

Mein erstes Tagebuch Ich bin aufgestanden um 9 Uhr heute und habe gegessen Brötchen und Käse. Nach dem Frühstuck ich habe gelernt Deutsch und Englisch für 4 Stunden. Meine Mutter hat gekocht Curry, und wir haben gegessen ihn. Ich muss morgen um 9 Uhr aufstehen. could anyone please correct these sentences? Danke schön :)