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Do I have any mistakes? Thank you
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing to complain about your service with my packet. I payed trought your webside on Wednseday, and I got a message about collecting my packet on Friday but nobody went to my friend ,s house to pick the packet up, so for this reason my packet has to go to the bin because my friends had to return home.
For this reason , I would like to get a refund of my money ( 22 euros) and an extra money for all the inconvenients I have had . I had lost all my things because the delivery didnt arrive the day they had to go.
I have to say that I am very disapointed with the service that you provide and I would like that anyone had this kind of problems. If my packet was not going to be collected I had have advised.
I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Regards.
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I need help
Dear Kelly
How are you? Many thank for your lovely email. I did not answer because I wanted to have time and write you with my computer.
I dont know if you know it but I am a teacher and work in other town and live there, then this weekend I packed all my stuff and came to my town, so I didnt have time to reply your email.
I am very happy about things you tell me.
No worries, about food, I dont usually eat red meat , I eat chicken too. I must confess that I love eating everything specially every kind because I love tasting all the food :).
If you wish we can text us by whatssap, my phone number is 0034616090334 so I will let you know the time we arrive. I think we will arrive at the airport at 7:00 pm.
Regards, about on sunday I think your plans are great to spend the day together and I am happy to do everything you choose.
I love your dogs, they look very cute. To be honest I am willing to travel to Liverpool ;:)
Sorry about my mistakes.
Thank you for everything.
Have a lovely day.
Mamen
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I need Help¡¡¡¡Please
Actually, I am a teacher in a bilingual school. I teach to children who are 4 years old and for me it is the best experience that you can have if you love chidren.
Sometimes I have doubts about some sentences when I am talking then I need to change the word I dont know if they are propelly.
Here I have to write about my doubts
Rober has done wiwi ( se ha hecho pipi)
Sitting down properly with your back straight??
Dont speak while your are eating.
Turn off the light when you leave the toilet
Go to the break
Put this in your school bag
Dont put your legs on the chair
Leave him alone
Dont paint the table
Thank you for everything
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My real experience
Actually, I am a teacher in a bilingual school. I teach to children who are 4 years old and for me it is the best experience that you can have if you love chidren.
Sometimes I have doubts about some sentences when I am talking then I need to change the word I dont know if they are propelly.
Here I have to write about my doubts
Rober has done wiwi ( se ha hecho pipi)
Sitting down properly with your back straight??
Dont speak while your are eating.
Turn off the light when you leave the toilet
Go to the break
Put this in your school bag
Dont put your legs on the chair
Leave him alone
Dont paint the table
Thank you for everything
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Proposal
Proposal
The student library was built twenty years ago and from then any change has been made.
At the moment, a small amount of money is available to change some aspects of necesity so I would like to suggest the following items.
Outside areas
In the back, there is a huge area which is not usable. Users report that it has not the suitable elements.
For example, a plastic grass of 50 m2 could be the ideal place to listen to the CDs and to read books, newspapers...
Another option would be to put sofas and tables which coulb de built with palets by teenagers, and cushions ( esto no supondría) a huge amount of money.
Decor
In relation with the decor, users believe that it is unfashionable and ( anticuada). The main aspect could be to paint the walls with ( luminosas) colours, that would give ( daría lugar) to other athmosphere that invite you to stay more time at the library.
Also the cracked plaster ( necesitaría ser renovada ya que esta se está cayendo) and disturb users.
Conclusion
It should be possible to make some changes to the student library without the neccesity to spend the budget. Some times creativity is more essential that to spend a lot amount of money.
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I only have to tell you , thank you so much
Tomorrow I have my english examen and have some questions that come to my mind when thinking about the speaking part , so I would like to write some doubts down so I can see if I have too many mistakes.
I just remember that I knew about this webside when one of my friend spoke to me about this and now I only can say that it is the best webside I could imagine. Apart from learning I have made some friends who are really kind and help me in every moment by whassap.
Last night I was studing and like a flash something came to my mind then I wrote to one of my friend and after this we wrote to each other because he was studing too and had some questions too.
Now in this moment I am looking at some pictures and thinking about what questions could contain the examn.
At the first moment I have to have: In the firt picture I can see two ladies who are enjoying with their niaces while having a great time because of the weather.
If I had to choose a city where I would like to live , I have to say I prefer to live or living in a small city because you can avoid taking transports all time , although I love going on foot I must confess that It takes you a long time to go from one place to other or another.
Thank you thank you so much.
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I am very grateful with this¡¡¡
Nowadays, young people tend to use social media websites as the main way of communication, but are they using too much these wbesites? What kind of information do they share?
Firstly, we can upload a large number of images about ourselves with the purpose of showing our feelings to the world. For example, it could be useful to keep our family up to date, but also companies can use these pictures to control their workers.
Moreover, the best way to keep in touch with your friends is posting comments on your profile, even if sometimes it could be embarrassing if someone reveals secret information and, for example, your parents see it.
However, you can control the privacity of your profile making available or not the viewing of your personal information, although the problem is that not everyone knows how to do it, and asking other people for it could make your intentions suspicious.
All in all, I think you can share whatever you want if you know all the consequences and you are concerned about it.
Health is one of the most important humanity issues, because it is essential to keep on living in good conditions.
Firstly, there is enough evidence that doing regularly exercise is good for health, but not all people is concerned about it. On the one hand, nowadays it is hard to find a moment to take exercise because everyone is busy with their own businesses or just they cannot afford a gym. On the other hand, it is known that you do not need to join a gym for taking exercise, you can just walk for half an hour as doctors recommend.
Secondly, eating habits are the next point to deal with, because overweight is a public health problem due to the easy access to convenience food in our modern society.
Also, toxic habits like smoking or taking drugs are emergent troubles which can cause cancer, because nowadays young people start to smoke, for example, just for being accepted in a social club.
In my opinion, currently people are forgetting that they need good health to live, so we should encourage people to have good lifestyles for living as good as they can and as much as it is possible.
It is known that animals are in danger because of the activities of humans.
Firstly, the problem is not the same in every single animal. In contrast, there are some particular species which are especially affected, such as elephants. These ones, unfortunately, are the target of companies which want to sell the marphil produced by them.
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please , please
PALMA: THE CITY WHERE YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE
Palma is a wonderful city in the island of Mallorca whose incredible landscapes are usually confused with paradise.
First of all, tourist can enjoy the beautiful beaches of the city where getting tanned becomes an unrepeatable experience because of the relaxing sound of the waves crashing into the coast. Visitors could find these characteristics wherever they go, but I particularly like "Es Caló Des Moro".
Secondly, tourist may think that the price of public transport is too high, but it is just the opposite: the prices are ridiculous and there are enough bus stations to arrive at every beach in the island.
Do you need more information for getting convinced? Then get ready for this: food is incredibly tasty and your senses will get out of control when you taste the delightful vegetables.
To conclude, everyone should come to Palma at least once in live to enjoy the relaxed atmosphere, and I can absolutely aseverate that place is the best place in the world to come to.
THE WORLD'S CALL
Nowadays, the planet is suffering because humans are doing toxic activities which are destroying it little by little. In my opinion, it's our duty to save the world, but how?
In my view, pollution is the first point to deal with: everybody it's using to cars which spread to the air the product of the oil combustion. The result of this is tonnes of carbon dioxide going to the atmosphere, causing terrible diseases to the animals and, what is more, to the human existence. There is a well-known solution for avoiding it: we can use the public transport or just riding a bicycle to going around our city.
On the other hand, the second point could be the use of the resources like water or electricity. The solution is very simple: just turn off the light when you are out of a room, or just close the tap while you are brushing your teeth or doing the washing-up.
What are you waiting for picking up the world's call? The whole Earth wants you to help it to save his life, because the planet will take care of us if we take care of it.
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I need help with this. Many thanks
It is believed that your family will always be by your side doing and important supportive task, but there are people who think that friends could be the best family you have ever had.
Firstly, the activities you do with your family mostly are traditional events like the typical meal at Christmas or celebrations for the birthday of someone else. On the other hand, with your friends you tend to do more recreational activities as clubbing or travelling around the world, so your own enjoyment would depend on the situation.
Moreover, if you ask your family for advice, you should take into account that your problems could make them worried, so it is better to choose carefully what you say. In contrast, it´is probably that your friends give you a more reasonable suggestion in order to help you.
Therefore, your family makes your education possible at school where you met some of your current friends. Because of this, we ought to be grateful for having the chance to meet such an incredible people.
In my opinion, family is more important than friends because they will be there for you forever, even if your friends disappoint you or fail you in a particular moment.
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I would be very grateful if you could help me
Dear Kim,
It's good to hear about you! It's been a long time since the last time you write to me.
I've given the flat's guard the keys, so you can ask him for it telling him your name and identity number in ordenr to ensure that you are the real Kim, because last week a thief broke into the flat and stole some of my personal belongings.
Also, you can find a supermarket near my house whose prices are very reasonable, but if you prefer to buy fresher fruit and vegetables there's a street market where local products are sold.
I have to remind you to check from time to time that everything is correct there, because some months ago we had a problem with the taps, which were broken and the flat started to lose water. If you notice something wrong, please let me know!
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
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