Here's my daily diary（just practice for my English so it might be informal） Would you help me modify my passage？thanks~ I promise I will write at least one piece of the diary per day. so here's the first day. Hope I can persist on it. I got a haircut two days ago. It's not bad but it also not good, I guess. I am not satisfied with it completely. But whatever, it's not a big deal. My hair will also grow again. Just be myself. Besides, I am not gonna meet people these days. Actually, I have been upset these several days. I don't know if it matters my unsatisfied haircut. But I guess the reason is more than about it. My lifestyle is unhealthy. I stayed up late last night. Actually, I often stay up late at night. But I have enough sleep cause I would wake up at noon. I know even though I sleep well but it is still not good for my health. My biology clock is broken. I got black circles around my eyes. I figure I'd better change these sleep-style things and have some work-out. OK. That's it for today. See me next time~Cheer myself up~

My good friend I have a good friend. We get along with each other very well. We have known each other for almost eight years. We met each other during the time in high school. She was my classmate and roommate so we were close at that time. She is nice to me and she is a kind girl as well. We still contact with each other after we graduated from high school and college. She is going to get married soon. I am so glad for her. Moreover, she want me to be her bridesmaid at her wedding. But I refused her at first because I am worried about that I couldn't be married in the future. According to a traditional saying from our hometown, it is hard for a girl to get married if you become someone else's bridesmaid too much times. In fact, I am not superstitious. I just kidding on her actually. I will attend her wedding ceremony and be her best bridesmaid by the time. I can't wait for that moment.

My second diary Yesterday my father had a cold. He, therefore, bought some pills at the store near his house. I didn't know that he was sick, so I didn't talk to him anything. However, I did feel that something was wrong with him. He went to bed earlier than me.

My English diary I got up at eleven this morning. And then I didn't have lunch immediately. First, I memorized some vocabularies on Shanbay，a website for memorizing words on the Internet. Then I learned some basic Korean from a studying video.

How to keep fit Hello everyone,My English name is Kitty.I am ten years old.I am in Grade four.I like reading and drawing. Today,I will talk about how to keep fit.Have a healthy body is very important. First,Good habits are good for the health .Every morning we had better get up early and do morning exercises before having breakfast.Taking a walk after supper is also important. It is not good to watch TV too long and go to bed too late.So try to have more sports in our spare time instead of staying at home. Second, you need to eat a Healthy Breakfast. As breakfast is the most important meal of a day. As we know we must have enough food to keep us healthy, it gives us energy. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food. At the same time, we should have a diet. People often say eat breakfast like a king, lunch like a prince and dinner like a beggar. Last but not least,We should go to bed early and wake up early.We should have enough sleep ,Or we will get sleepy in the day time. If we pay more attention to the tips above,We will have healthier body.I wish everybody has a strong and healthy body.

people are no more talking face-to-face with one another Recently, with the rising use of smart phone and the rapid development of Internet technology, there has witnessed a common phenomenon that people, especially youngsters, are no more talking face-to-face with one another. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list: some play mobile phone when having dinner with other people, which has little communication; when relatives pay a visit, some leave themselves alone in bedroom, updating WeChat or Weibo; and some send their congratulation to people in festivals by WeChat while didn't convey it in a real world. In my understanding, a number of factors could account for the phenomenon, but the following might be the most critical ones. First of all, kinds of high-tech applications in smart phone have made the access to recreation more convenient. Nowadays, people become more and more reliant on smart phone as a result of its convenience. We can make use of it to do everything in daily life such as learning about hot news, watching videos, shopping online, chatting, photographing, even snatching red envelopes and so on. Therefore, an increasing number of people are addicted to smart phone so that they tend to spend more time online than chatting with others, their parents included, face to face. Besides, most people in modern society are short of communication skills. Therefore, when they get together with some acquaintances or elder relatives, playing smart phone becomes a best way to avoid communicating with each other and embarrassment. What's more, due to fuller and freer expression of one's thoughts, such online means of communication as WeChat, QQ and Weibo, are affecting interpersonal communication. People are accustomed to these online means of communication which bring the distance between family and friends. In a word, although there do exist more and more positive influence with Internet and smart phone, we should also pay due attention to its negative effect. After all, communication can not just only depend on modern media. No matter what fun emoji and what fine words you send, due to the absence of facial expression, eye contact, gestures, physical contact and timely feedback, misunderstanding may come as a result, leading to conflict eventually. What we should change is enjoying the benefits of smart phones, meanwhile, be more active to communicate with our family members or friends face-to-face.

people are no more talking face-to-face with one another Recently, with the rising use of smart phone and the rapid development of Internet technology, there has witnessed a common phenomenon that people, especially youngsters, are no more talking face-to-face with one another. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list: some play mobile phone when having dinner with other people, which has little communication; when relatives pay a visit, some leave themselves alone in bedroom, updating WeChat or Weibo; and some send their congratulation to people in festivals by WeChat while didn't convey it in a real world. In my understanding, a number of factors could account for the phenomenon, but the following might be the most critical ones. First of all, kinds of high-tech applications in smart phone have made the access to recreation more convenient. Nowadays, people become more and more reliant on smart phone as a result of its convenience. We can make use of it to do everything in daily life such as learning about hot news, watching videos, shopping online, chatting, photographing, even snatching red envelopes and so on. Therefore, an increasing number of people are addicted to smart phone so that they tend to spend more time online than chatting with others, their parents included, face to face. Besides, most people in modern society are short of communication skills. Therefore, when they get together with some acquaintances or elder relatives, playing smart phone becomes a best way to avoid communicating with each other and embarrassment. What's more, due to fuller and freer expression of one's thoughts, such online means of communication as WeChat, QQ and Weibo, are affecting interpersonal communication. People are accustomed to these online means of communication which bring the distance between family and friends. In a word, although there do exist more and more positive influence with Internet and smart phone, we should also pay due attention to its negative effect. After all, communication can not just only depend on modern media. No matter what fun emoji and what fine words you send, due to the absence of facial expression, eye contact, gestures, physical contact and timely feedback, misunderstanding may come as a result, leading to conflict eventually. What we should change is enjoying the benefits of smart phones, meanwhile, be more active to communicate with our family members or friends face-to-face.

(please help me modify the paragraph！)what's the benefit from Intercultural Communication for you? For me, the benefit from Intercultural Communication course are as follows. First of all, studying Intercultural Communication can expand my horizon to some extent on the different cultures around the world . I realized that all the difference between the Orient and the Occident has its origin. Thus, it can help me study the foreign culture and Chinese culture deeply. What's more, I can behave more courteous when communicating with people from different countries and avoid the confliction as much as possible. Furthermore, studying Intercultural Communication can help me adapt to the new environment quickly. If you have sufficient knowledge about different culture background, you will become more adaptable to work with foreign people. Sometimes, you can also act properly in the awkward situation. Most importantly, studying Intercultural Communication can lay a foundation of work in the future. With the development of globalization, cultural communication becomes more and more important. We can not only learn more aspects of culture but also can utilize the information form it to acquire more advantages during your whole career. To sum up, Intercultural Communication will not only benefit to your improvement of culture knowledge but also enhance your communication skills of across countries.

(please help me modify the paragraph！)what's the benefit from Intercultural Communication for you? For me, the benefit from Intercultural Communication course are as follows. First of all, studying Intercultural Communication can expand my horizon to some extent on the different cultures around the world . I realized that all the difference between the Orient and the Occident has its origin. Thus, it can help me study the foreign culture and Chinese culture deeply. What's more, I can behave more courteous when communicating with people from different countries and avoid the confliction as much as possible. Furthermore, studying Intercultural Communication can help me adapt to the new environment quickly. If you have sufficient knowledge about different culture background, you will become more adaptable to work with foreign people. Sometimes, you can also act properly in the awkward situation. Most importantly, studying Intercultural Communication can lay a foundation of work in the future. With the development of globalization, cultural communication becomes more and more important. We can not only learn more aspects of culture but also can utilize the information form it to acquire more advantages during your whole career. To sum up, Intercultural Communication will not only benefit to your improvement of culture knowledge but also enhance your communication skills of across countries.