Trying to learn to write in english 10 At that moment I was really confused and a little bit scared. Detective Carter asked whether I was all right or not. I said "Yes, I am fine. I just need to get some fresh air". He walked directly to officer that had showed us Rachel's mobile phone a few minutes ago. I took a glance at him before I went out of the train. It was a breezy night but I felt the cold though. I got my hand into my pocket and took the letter. The fact is that besides two lines of girl names there was one extra sentence. "If you need help, request Saintly Frank." How high is the chance that he is THAT Frank. I mean what is probability of that there could be two Franks whose friends and someone else call "saintly Frank". Maybe I was going crazy due to my state of shock. I did not like it. I absolutely did not like it. Someone's hand tapped me on the shoulder. I nearly jumped out of my skin.

Trying to learn to write in english 9 A tall, well-build man came to me. "I am detective Carter. An officer said you wanted to see me and you know something about a man who did this". His voice was quite gentle. "Yes detective, you see, I have witnessed all this. This guy that I was chasing after...". " You put you life at risk young man, but it was very brave of you." He interrupted. "Thanks. Nevertheless, I was not be able to reach him, but I found...". "Hey, Saintly Frank, look what we have found." Some officer broke in. "Probably her mobile phone. It was 1 mile far along railway". He showed the phone carefully holding it." Continue investigation Jack, tell me if you will find something else." "Sorry for that Mr..." "Sam Finch." "They call me that because of catholic school." He said with a little smile. "So, What you were going to tell me ?". I was staying unmoving for a second and my head was aching. "Nothing. I am just shocked by all this situation. Sorry to disturb you, ser"

Trying to learn to write in english 8 The police and an ambulance appeared almost simultaneously. A few policemen were inspecting the body while the others inquiring people who had been in that train at the time a murder had occured. There was a lot of people. It seemed like a regular crime scene I supposed. One of the policeman came to me and asked if I was all right and that he had to questioned me. I told him the whole story including the very beginning about that guy and how he was acting himself in a highly suspicious way. I described him in detail. Afterwards, I said that I had found something when I had tried to catch him. "What would I have done if I had succeeded. I can not imagine I could have seized him or something." I think. I said that he could be some kind of a serial killer and there might be another victim, her sister. I think he treated me theory with scepticism but send for a detective.

Trying to learn to write in english 7 I was staying outside all alone. Thinking about all this, about that guy and the letter. Why did he kill her and why he has this letter. A thought came to me that propably her sister was dead as well. But what if not. The old man said she had hurried when he saw her on the station and I supossed she hurried to Manchester to her sister. There must have been two reason. The first is that she was told that with her sister had happened terrible things or the second is that she learned something about herself and her sister. Anyway, I should wait the police and make a suggestion I have. If I tell them about letter it will help them a lot with investigation and they will make sure Elizabeth will be safe. If it is not to late. I went back to the train and sat next to the old man. I swear he looked like he just lost a daughter. He was very king person, I guess. We were patiently waiting for the police and ambulance.

Trying to learn to write in english He took her purse and gave it to me. I took a seat and opened it. I fumbled around for her mobilephone or documents. I found her driven license. The name was Rachel Ryan. The birth date was 1994. "Too young to die" I thought. I started feeling a bit feverish. "Have you found your phone? It is better to inform her parents" told the old man. "No, she have not got one here, maybe it is with her, in her pockets." He looked at her coat cautiosly. "It seems not". I put her stuff back in purse. "Her name is Rachel" I said emotionlessly. Saw it on her driven license. He did not care much. He seemed to feel a great sorrow as it was his personal loss. I remembered him for that . "What is taking the police so long ?" I asked woman who I clearly remembered called to them. She shrugged her shoulders. Being in the middle of all this made me feel dizzy. I needed some fresh air. I went to the door.

People on the thrain were scared. People on the thrain were scared. Some woman sat not too far from the body and crying. The old man was just looking at her and hold her hand. He had probably been holding it the whole time since this had happend. As I getting closer I put the envelope into my pocket. Do you know is she ? Her...name ? I asked nervously. I got frightened when he looked at me. No, but I met her at the station. She come over me and asked what time was. I remember her because her voice trembling and she did not looked well at all. He closed his eyes with a sigh. When I answered and she went away I thought at that moment I hope everything is fine with her. He raised his eyes and looked at me. Turned out it was not. I think he kind of felt responsible for her, even though he should not have. Maybe we could check her documents. I asked timidly. In case there is some phone numbers so we can call her relatives. I do not know how soon police will be here. It is shame to admit but truth is I mainly wanted to know her name. I think we we should. He nodded.

As I said it was gloomy outside. As I said it was gloomy outside. I went to the place where I saw something was fall on the ground. Looking around the area I found what I was after. It was crumpled envelope. I put it up and surveyed. Just envelope with no mark on it. And no sight of the owner of it. I unfolded envelope. A letter was inside with three sentences. Two of these were names. Rachel and Elizabeth Ryans. What is that? I thought. I raised my eyebrows and looked at the window where I stood a few minutes before. Is one of those girls is...there ? I looked around one more time to sure there was nobody who can saw anything. I got back on the train. When I walked in, the body was still there. Why would it be somewhere else ? I thought. I was just shocked by all this. The old man was sitting with her as well. I checked the letter once more and went to the body.

Trying to learn to write in english It was dark outside. The train stoped so quickly that half the people tumble down the floor. I was looking for him, I knew we stoped because of him, he was trying to escape this place as soon as possible. I took a glance at the girl, I wish I had not done that. Her bloody face stucked in my mind. I was still looking for some movements over the train. Suddenly, I saw something getting through the light from lamps near railway. The same clothes and filled with fear eyes, It definetly was him. As he running I managed to catch a sight of thing similar to a peace of paper which fall from his pocket. He did not noticed it and keep going from what he had done. I got to the door as fast as I can.