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Describe a line graph.
A glance at the two graphs provided reveals some information about the effect of treatment in two types of cancer, namely Alimentary tract cancer and Lymphosarcoma, in females.
When it comes to Alimentary tract cancer, It is noteworthy that women who received the treatment maintain a higher level of survival rate than others. Decreasing steadily in the first three years, this rate then stays at somewhere near 48 per cent. Meanwhile, cases without treatment have a lower survival rate--drop dramatically in the first year, before sliding marginally to approximately 18 per cent in next four years.
With regard to Lymphosareoma, it can be easily found out that treatment make no difference in the first two years, but in the following years, women whodid not receive the treatment keep a 25 per cent survival rate whiletheir counterparts are still dying, with no one survived in the end of the fifth year.
To conclude, this treatment is effective on treating Alimentary tract cancer and is useless, even harmful, on treating Lymphosareoma.
19 Ocak 2015
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Ielts Writing
Tiltle :Some people say the best way to solve traffic congetions in cities is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day,7 days a week.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Trafiic jam happens more and more frequently in some cities and it causes invenient effect on people's daily life.Some people say the best way to solve this problem is that goverment need to provide free public transport for 24hours a day and 7days a week.Personally speaking,I don not agree with that.
On the surface, to provide all-day public transport can help to alleviate the satuation.To start with, it is able to afford public transport every minute in the cities,so it benifit some people who go out in unusual time.For example, the closing time of some workers can become flexiable and these people can also take bus though the time is late instead of driving their own cars,it can decrease the number of cars which are on road at these times.
However, this possibility still has some potential shortages which we need to research more deeply. Traffic congetions always happens during the rush time but the service are still run in the other time,It is mean that the transport systerm still needs a lot of power resource and labor foces to maintain the extra working time of transport systerm.Compared with the cost, the return makes the project unworthy, wasting our public resources and causing more problems in the future.
All in all, in my view, the best way to deal with traffic congetions is to instill enviromental values to citizens.People should go out advoiding the rush time, and if it possiable,riding bikes or walking are better chioces when their time is available and it benifits people's health as well.Goverment also need to perfect traffic management systerm, that combines the different factors—the transportation, human beings and the infrastructure—helping them to with each other completely and efficiently.
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